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| Guest_Cathy_* |
 Aug 7 05, 08:51
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Response to Pandora's Challenge
MM MEMBER Pretty lady Grace can crit without a trace of malicious attitude, she has never been rude. Pretty lady Grace, her wrists adorned in lace, picks up her pen, a poem to write, and pictures, what a sight! MM MEMBER Funny lady Nina who writes from a cantina, is friendly as she can be to all of you ... and me. Funny lady Nina she dreamed of ballerinas, now when she writes a bit prose she stands upon her toes! MM MEMBER Feisty ole Just Dan' is really quite the man. I love the way he teaches with cute little poetic speeches. Feisty ole Just Dan' he'll help you all he can. With a well-trained poetic mind he leaves the gunk behind. FAMOUS PERSON The popular Madonna spent too much time in sauna, now she's red and slightly pruned as she stands on stage to croon. FAMOUS PERSON Miss Agatha Christie who's heart beat rather friskie at the frightening crime she sat to pen, for her perps were all young men. FAMOUS PERSON Oh, to be President Bush and sit upon your tush, to delegate the meanest chores and run for four years more. (No offense intended. I know he does much more! LOL) BOOK CHARACTER~from Murder, She Wrote That Mrs Jessie Fletcher the killer has yet to ketch 'er. She 'id inside the darkened room and felled 'im with 'er broom! BOOK CHARACTER~from Moby Dick The crusty Captain Ahab intended just a jab but delivered quite a shocking stick when he stopped ole Moby Dick. BOOK CHARACTER~from Horton Hatches the Egg Poor, poor Horton thought about abortin' the nest that made him rather sad before becoming "dad". Cathy Bollhoefer~ copyright Aug2005 |
  
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| Guest_Nina_* |
Aug 7 05, 08:56
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Hi Cathy
You have written a great set of clerihews Cathy with warm gentle humour that is most chucklesome. thank you Nina |
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| Guest_Don_* |
Aug 7 05, 09:44
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Dear Cathy,
Very well done. Don |
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Aug 13 05, 11:46
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Book Character
Oh Romeo! Romeo, what he didn't know... if only he waited to learn the truth he could've become a fine sleuth! School Teacher Mrs. Good My second grade teacher Mrs. Good tried to find ways to harass (as she could) but what she didn't know all along we were actually singing her song! Famous Person Eric Bana You soared over HULKing in Troy, Eric Bana, as Hector, you bulked more than Indiana Jones we all know; Will your career take you higher or will your role choices make them dire?    ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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| Guest_Don_* |
Aug 13 05, 12:19
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Hi Cleo,
Interesting to say the least. The last one confused me, but I got the gist. Don |
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Aug 13 05, 12:29
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Don @ Aug. 13 2005, 13:19) Hi Cleo, Interesting to say the least. The last one confused me, but I got the gist. Don Hi Don. Eric Bana played the lead role in the movie HULK, which aired before the movie TROY. Personally, I think he did a much finer job in Troy as Hector.  :lovie: Indiana Jones is the character played by Harrison Ford in the Radiers of the Lost Ark trilogy from the 80's.  Cheers! ~CLeo ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Aug 13 05, 12:31
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
a few more:
Book Character Robert Langdon Harvard Symbologist Robert Langdon was key to uncover a Masonic decree - and found more than bargained for in the scripts of 'Angels & Demons', the Vatican crypts! Famous Person Orlando Bloom As legolas, a blonde Orlando Bloom the Elf-man saved Middle Earth from doom But as Paris in Troy, he was more like a boy. ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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| Guest_Don_* |
Aug 13 05, 13:06
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crypts does not ryhme with midst.
Don |
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Aug 13 05, 13:09
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Don @ Aug. 13 2005, 14:06) crypts does not ryhme with midst. Don Oops! :upside: :blush21: :oops: I've changed it to scripts.... TY Don :grinning: ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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| Guest_Don_* |
Aug 13 05, 13:27
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QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Aug. 13 2005, 14:09) QUOTE (Don @ Aug. 13 2005, 14:06) crypts does not ryhme with midst. Don Oops!  I've changed it to scripts.... TY Don  Works for me. |
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