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Hi Daniel,
I think there is a gremlin loose here practising for Hallowe'en. I posted a reply to this and it has disappeared! Anyway to reiterate;
Do you know how hard it is to catch a katauta on the run?? I have been chasing this one around with my net but it just kept escaping through the holes, going round and around like a fairground duck!
AH GOTCHA!!!
Is it possible for critique to morph a piece... to new, broader perspective?
to our Just Daniel 'morpher extraordinaire' - YES I'm mor phor a peaceful life!
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Perhaps yin and yang cooperate in morphing? Doesn't exercise bring peace?
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Good morning Daniel
This forces me into a comic reply again. How will I ever learn serious Katauta/Mondo? This is fun Daniel, but I would really like to write something lovely. Maybe next time?
Perhaps yin and yang cooperate in morphing? Doesn't exercise bring peace?
Most assuredly, but today, must tai chi n up to prevent a yawn
Wearily....zzzzzzz (I’m plum tuckered out, as you might say!! )
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tai chi n up indeed, Grace! I thought I'd responded to this with a laugh, but let me do it now!
Here is a solo mondo I wrote in court the other day. I hope it makes sense:
accidental litigation
what is his dispute? his car hit mine fair and square… in my front quarter panel
a passing fancy, not a wink as I eased by; then I sensed his nose… and crunch
chilled apprehension in court, unrepresented; why is it I feel guilty?
business suit and robe befuddle civilian tongue; doubts at the point of in-fact
en español break I await prosecutor; why should there be postponement?
a legal tactic straw-grasping for a witness; hope I’ll give in, not show up
meanwhile, my car waits; will it protest my return? will it creak at the outcome?
after conferring I offer to plead the fifth; I shudder to tell my car