 The Song Of Mistress La Lash, Odin II ~ Gold |
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 Feb 11 06, 10:37
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Congratulations on your Gold placement!
 You have risen up, drank from the Well of Wisdom and have been crowned the ‘bringer of victory’!   Well done! :pharoah2 ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
  
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Jan 16 06, 01:01
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 Assyrian  Posts: 153 Joined: 22-August 03 From: West Monroe, Louisiana Member No.: 20 Real Name: Chris Writer of: Poetry |
 The Song Of Mistress La Lash Come over here and kiss me. Slide your fingers through my hair. Look into my eyes and say how much you really care Wrap your arms around me; trail your hands along my spine, brush your silky lips upon each eye and tell me I'm sublime. Let me feel you quiver, as I'm held in your embrace, then drop upon one knee and say, you've finally learned your place. When you have pleased my passions, and shown me your respect, I'll reward your meager efforts with the treat that you expect. I'll give you what you really want, the pleasure mixed with pain... . But the truth of your humility will bring me wealth and fame. There are many like you, who keep secret their desires. They all come to have me fan, those smokey hidden fires. They come here domineering, but I teach them to submit, and when they finally leave me, they have a smile upon their lips. When next you come to visit, know that your secrets I will keep. Just put some money by the lash, and place a kiss upon my feet. ······· ·······"...Morgan le Fay was not married, but put to school in a nunnery, where she became a great mistress of magic."
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Jan 16 06, 06:43
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Thank you for your entry into Odin's Opposition! :troy:
Perhaps you’ll rise up, drink from the Well of Wisdom and be crowned the ‘bringer of victory’? Best of luck in the battle! :vic: ~Mosaic Musings Staff  ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Feb 12 06, 13:21
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Assyrian Posts: 153 Joined: 22-August 03 From: West Monroe, Louisiana Member No.: 20 Real Name: Chris Writer of: Poetry |
Hi everybody,
Thank You for selecting, " The Song Of Mistress La Lash", for the Gold Award in Odin's Opposition 2! I'm very honored to have had my poem selected for this award. This is so COOL! Thank you so much to Lori, and all the staff here at MM. I appreciate the opportunity to be a part of all the talented folks who participate here at this wonderful forum of expression and fellowship. Also a big congratulations to Sylvia for her Silver and Bronze award! Hey gal, you got two!  And to Cynthia and Cathy, congratulations on your Merrit awards! I enjoyed reading all of the entries and know that it must have been very hard to choose between them. All were wonderful and worthy of an award. Thanks again folks, and again Congratulations to all the participants of Odin's #2.  Best regards, Chris 
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- ?Mallory, Morte d'Arthur MM Award Winner |
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Feb 12 06, 17:34
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Congratulations Chris!
I truly enjoyed the poem, it had just a touch of humor and the rhythm is great ... kinda sing-songy! It's a well deserved award! Cathy :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:
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Feb 12 06, 19:04
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 883 Joined: 2-January 06 From: Washington State USA Member No.: 145 Writer of: Poetry |
This poem has such an incredible surprise ending, it truly made me gasp and giggle, well done Chris.
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Feb 13 06, 09:54
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 8,877 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Congrats, Chris, on this wonderful poem ! Great rhythm and deftly handled humor, makes one think... :wizard: as well as smile !!
Well-deserved Gold Plaque !! Hugs, Sylvia :cloud9: ······· ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner    |
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Feb 15 06, 18:39
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,822 Joined: 3-August 03 From: Florida Member No.: 10 Real Name: Elizabeth Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori Kanter |
CONGRATULATIONS CHRIS...
I remembered this poem on Poemkingdom and I loved it then and loved it now. A poem well worth the win. Congratulations! Best wishes, Liz ······· ·······Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here!
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Feb 22 06, 13:56
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Assyrian Posts: 153 Joined: 22-August 03 From: West Monroe, Louisiana Member No.: 20 Real Name: Chris Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Ladies!
Thanks so much to all of you for popping in and offering your congratulations. I really appreciate all of your comments and warm wishes. :lovie: Yes, this poem was written with a poster from PK in mind. LOL! Liz, Cathy, do you remember a poster by the name of 'Claw'? He was always joking around about wearing a French Maid costume, and one day surprised us all by saying that he was changing into his Mistress La Lash costume. At the time, it really tickled my funny bone and my muse, so this poem was the result of that. I had a great deal of fun writing it and glad that it brought a smile to everyone. I never did find out if Claw had ever read it, or not?  Also posted it here several years ago, in response to Arnfin's, "A Bawdy Night At Camelot".  Thanks again everyone. I feel very honored to have won this award. :king: Hugs, Chris :wizard: ······· ·······"...Morgan le Fay was not married, but put to school in a nunnery, where she became a great mistress of magic."
- ?Mallory, Morte d'Arthur MM Award Winner |
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