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Aphrodite
post Jan 17 07, 17:41
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QUOTE (jgdittier @ Jan 16 07, 21:05 ) *
Dear Linda,
Providing vivid images and communicating emotion are the stuff that poetry is made of.
At least for me "Christmas Recall" paints a vivid picture and the seedy pside of town and allows me to change my image of the dreamer stanza by stanza.
I first see a young girl crouching by the hearth, then a young women of the drurdgery class with her cld chapped hands nevertheless thankful for the minimal joys of the season, then escaping her actual surroundings she relives more pleasant thoughts of earlier Christmasses. Her mental return to reality is sad and gruesome, but hope survives. It's a rollercoaster ride for the emotions!
Cheers, Ron jgd


Hi Ron, Snowflake.gif

Thank you so much for your detailed response and glowing remarks! You are so sweet and I deeply appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and make me smile. sprite.gif

Blessings~
Lindi


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post Jan 18 07, 04:07
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QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Jan 16 07, 19:46 ) *
Hello John, sun.gif

How have you been? Thank you so much for your complimentary response to my poem and for nominating it!

This is a nice surprise as I have been in somewhat of a dry spell the last year! I am truly honored and appreciate your insight and opinion.

Many thanks, Snowflake.gif terminator.gif
Lindi



The pleasure was all mine Lindi. Wizard.gif

An exceptional piece of poetry.


John troy.gif Wizard.gif


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