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Apr 24 24, 07:34
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my drive helps dentist because I forget to brush; he fills in the gaps
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Apr 26 24, 09:59
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He felt in the grapes for seeds of sobriety; don’t ferment the juice.
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Apr 27 24, 03:15
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don't foment for Jews who will not come to your aid ask those in Gaza
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May 3 24, 10:21
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Those in Gaza asked their leaders, Hamas, for peace. The Jewry’s still out.
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May 4 24, 05:53
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the jury's still lout refused to give a pinion; could hear feather drop
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May 13 24, 09:38
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A feather drops near the tree with the eagle’s nest, fledglings are fed meat.
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May 13 24, 10:58
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fledglings meet a Fed; giving him an eagle eye they flee to their nest
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May 21 24, 08:36
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The fleas in their nest try to hide from the fledglings; they are just desserts
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May 22 24, 02:47
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got his just desserts after meal of pie, ice cream; threw up on his plate
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