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| Guest_Cathy_* |
 May 28 07, 18:49
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Stargazing
prompts imaginative elysian poetic themes. Cathy Bollhoefer copyright May 22, 07 |
  
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May 28 07, 19:35
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cathy @ May 29 07, 00:49 )  Stargazing prompts imaginative elysian poetic themes. Cathy Bollhoefer copyright May 22, 07 Hey -- this is good Cathy. Only thing is I've forgotten the rules of hay(na)ku. Its on word count rather than syllables if I remember ??? I'll go and refresh my memory. It'll have to be tomorrow as it's already 1.30 here -- must go to bed. Snow 
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May 29 07, 04:33
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Mosaic Master Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Hi Cathy -- I'm back!
I've refreshed my memory on this form -- must try one! The only thing I am wondering about yours is, does it tell more than show? Something to ponder! Snow
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Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner |
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May 29 07, 07:38
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Cathy.
 Welcome to our new forum!   This form is so appealing and you've added your fantastical touch to this image I have in my mind with it. Hard to believe that 6 words can do so - but well done! You've inspired me to give this form a try. I just have a few ideas on a change to the word 'prompts': elicits, evokes, stimulates, incites. Of these, I like 'incites' the most - but the choice of course is yours to take or toss any of these. Stargazing elysian poetic themes. Lovely! ~Cleo 
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May 29 07, 16:21
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 544 Joined: 3-May 07 From: Central Florida Member No.: 427 Real Name: Judith Labriola Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE (Cathy @ May 28 07, 19:49 ) Stargazing prompts imaginative elysian poetic themes. Cathy Bollhoefer copyright May 22, 07 Hi Cathy... Here are the rules I learned for Haiku...but there may be other forms??? First line - 5 syllables. Second line - 7 syllables. Third line - 5 syllables. I am not sure if this fits into that scheme...is there another? Judi ······· ······· |
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May 30 07, 07:55
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Mosaic Master Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Judi @ May 29 07, 22:21 ) QUOTE (Cathy @ May 28 07, 19:49 ) Stargazing prompts imaginative elysian poetic themes. Cathy Bollhoefer copyright May 22, 07 Hi Cathy... Here are the rules I learned for Haiku...but there may be other forms??? First line - 5 syllables. Second line - 7 syllables. Third line - 5 syllables. I am not sure if this fits into that scheme...is there another? Judi Hi Judi This form is Hay(na)ku -- not haiku. Yes, confusing isn't it?!! LOL!! Briefly the form is 1st line -- one word 2nd line -- 2 words 3rd line -- 3 words and you are restricted with syllable counts. Sounds easy,eh? Well I'm still puzzling on one. It's not so easy. My hat off to you Cathy! Snow
······· ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner |
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| Guest_Cathy_* |
Jun 6 07, 15:57
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Hey ladies!
Thanks for dropping in to take a look-see! But I'm still puzzled by them! ROFL Cathy |
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