 Poetry Exercise #3, I am Invisible for 24 hours! |
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  Mar 21 04, 12:07
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
What would do if you could be invisible for 24 hours?
Where would you go? What do you think you'll see or hear that you wouldn't normally? Would you 'spy' on someone at work in a meeting (like your boss)? Perhaps you'd follow someone around? Remember all the times you've said, "I wish I could be a fly on the wall!" Now's your chance to imagine what goes on... Write out a scene in poetic style of your day as an invisible. Good luck! :cheer: Mosaic Musings Staff :knight: ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
  
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Mar 29 04, 20:47
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
No takers yet on this one?
HHMmmm - I'll be writing something when time permits... :) ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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May 21 04, 11:45
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 18,596 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
hidden parse anality
Am I not visible? No matter where I am it seems to take an awful lot of effort to imagine that a thing so insignificant as eye should e’er be crossing t’s …not dotting yours… am I? © M Lee Dickens’ son 21 May 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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May 21 04, 16:41
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Just Daniel @ May 21 2004, 12:45) hidden parse anality Am I not visible? No matter where I am it seems to take an awful lot of effort to imagine that a thing so insignificant as eye should e’er be crossing t’s …not dotting yours… am I? © M Lee Dickens’ son 21 May 2004 Hey Daniel! :sun: This is AWESOME! :tut: Let me congratulate you on being the first to respond to this exercise! BRAVO! :cheer: :cloud9: You have been missed friend! :cali: HUGS!  ~Cleo ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jun 8 04, 06:19
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,596 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
the question
to be invisible where no one sees the fool whose jest a wee bit too much touched might better be than flailing all about where passers seldom drop a pence into his tasseled hat? to be or not to be © M Lee Dickens’ son 08 June 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jun 8 04, 12:35
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QUOTE (Just Daniel @ June 08 2004, 06:19) the question to be invisible where no one sees the fool whose jest a wee bit too much touched might better be than flailing all about where passers seldom drop a pence into his tasseled hat? to be or not to be © M Lee Dickens’ son 08 June 2004 I not only like your verse, but must drop a virtual pence into your hat. Glad to see you here again. Don |
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Jun 9 04, 04:50
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,596 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
thank you for not keeping me in sus-pence, Don! It's a joy to see you pass by!
deLightedly, Daniel :sun: ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jul 27 04, 15:15
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abandonment[B]
he stole her heart touched her soul freed her mind seduced her body awakened her passions and then he went away left her invisible and alone with herself |
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