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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
  Aug 4 03, 19:37
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Is This The Place ? I wandered lonely streets of paradise with my trusty Simpsons lunch box, undressed, pure as the naked cherubs, it occurred to me,that I was being sent to the gentleness of heaven, of my own accord, in my reverie, (Most sweet it is), I felt like a violet, by a wayside stand to make amends, for all transient sorrows, committed... in my life, it brings fresh pleasure, to my soul a journey of inspiration on... being bound by truths, and so the grandeur, of my mission in life ,unfolds here today, as I enter this wondrous place, I bring, just the touch of earthly man. |
  
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Aug 4 03, 20:58
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Very lovely Larry!
This is one my favorites of yours! Very nice flow and a touch of happiness mixed with sad as Homer moves to a new stage of life... Well done! Lori :) ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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| Guest_Don_* |
Aug 10 03, 11:20
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Enjoyed reading this each and every time, Larry.
Don |
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Aug 20 03, 17:55
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Don,
this kind of grew on me too. Thanks for enjoying. z2, Larry |
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 Jan 26 04, 20:08
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 Babylonian  Posts: 80 Joined: 25-January 04 From: Alpharetta, Ga. Member No.: 52 Real Name: Elaine Crump Writer of: Poetry |
Enjoyed the visual images: a journey begun with pure intentions, armed only with 'a Simpson's lunchbox' and a fistful of imagination. Well done! I enjoyed this one. Now, where are you taking us next?:
 :  Elaine
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| Guest_codger_* |
Jan 27 04, 09:30
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Glad I came across this one, a real little jem.
 Gerry |
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Jan 28 04, 18:52
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Hi Elaine,
Thank you for your nice comments. This was part of the challenge thing elsewhere on this site. Stay tuned for other stuff. And welcome to MM. Larry |
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Jan 28 04, 18:55
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Gerry,
actually, this was a very enjoyable write, once I had my theme sorted out. Poor ole Homer Simpson. Somebody has to watch out for him  Thanks Larry |
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| Guest_zara_* |
Jan 30 04, 11:34
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I very much enjoyed the imagery in this and the feeling it brings.
Wonderfully written!  ~Thanks~
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