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AMETHYST
post Mar 17 09, 03:42
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I would like to nominate Kitchen Contemplations by Robin Dewalt (Merle) for its skillful use of poetic techniques and ability to show and not tell the story. The poem allows the reader to mull and anazlyze the subject from their own perspective.


Kitchen Contemplations by Robin Cherry-DeWalt


The spaghetti pot talks
while her fingers walk
on windowpanes of steam.
Perhaps one day
she won't just pray
and wake outside her dream.

Take a trip to France
learn the language dance
bonjour and s'il vous plait.
Or Italy
where love is free
and passions never sway.

She warms the bread
when she hears his tread
of boot on wooden stair.
Prepares his drink
in a routine blink
and touches up her hair.


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Cleo_Serapis
post Apr 2 09, 19:49
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Good luck with this poem at the IBPC, Robin! cheer.gif

~Cleo pharoah2.gif


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Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!

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merle
post Apr 14 09, 19:53
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Hi Cleo - Thank you so much for the well wishes. It's very flattering to be nominated.


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Cleo_Serapis
post Apr 15 09, 05:43
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Yes, and you'll have an 'award mini-plaque' in your signature too (this weekend when I do my updates).

Cool! cool.gif

~Cleo hsdance.gif


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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings

Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind.

"I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter

Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!

"Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.

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Sekhmet
post Apr 19 09, 01:42
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Hi Robin - Congratulations on your award! You have one of the most original voices of all the poets I have read on poetry forums; so very human, and yet - so keenly observant.
Leo


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merle
post Apr 19 09, 18:53
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Hello Leo - Your words give me the encouragement to continue learning. Thank you so much.


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