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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 8,877 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting  |
Warm Coverlet
Snowflakes float in all directions: fragile, hapless crystals borne by chancy breezes less stable than hearts' in bloom. Giddy water molecules transformed into hexagons, or other symmetrical shapes, ascending, or descending, flippant like Chaos’ unrelenting hazard. One heart beats erratically, attuned to nature’s dance, from a lofty metal bed. Quilted and pillowed, eyes unfocused, gazing at gauzy air. This heart is not hampered by diffident frozen droplets, a myriad of them tracing patterns on steamy window panes, cautioning those languid eyes. Soothing, salty tears shed by an exiled mind on white cotton robes in harsh winter's clime… Will snow keep this heart cozy, under a geometric patchwork stitched by chuckling old ladies? God’s creatures lie dormant beneath snow’s warm coverlet. By Psyche, Bariloche, Argentina. 2016 ·······  ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner              |
  
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Psyche Warm Coverlet Dec 19 16, 16:00 
mt2polar Syl,
I'm having a hard time finding myself in... Dec 19 16, 20:34 Psyche Hi mt2,
Thanks for commenting on my poem. I'll... Dec 21 16, 16:14 
Eisa I thought I'd commented on this yesterday, Syl... Jan 5 17, 17:45 Psyche Hi Eisa,
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