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Empathy seemed to be lost, when unpicking became carelessness. Memories became tattered; dragonfly's wings lost in storms. After what seemed to be a deluge, you tried to take me back, needling time until the break of dawn, making trust irrelevant, scalding fate baring the foundations.
ORIGINAL
Empathy seemed to be lost, when unpicking became carelessness. Memories became tattered like; snapdragons wings lost in storms. After what seemed to be a deluge, you intentionally tried to take me back, needling me until the break of dawn, making trust irrelevant, sealing our fate baring the foundations.
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Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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