Hi David
Well I can totally identify with this..there's always something crucial I'm going to get my act together and do...tomorrow!!!!
Although I think this poem is probably about more than minor things that need to be done somehow! roads left standing unpaved. I could see in this poem, all those things that need to be said or done..the really heart-felt and important things that we think we have all the time in the world for.
Great point in the last lines!
in a blink the scene opens to satin sheets in conversant bed and bedmate’s mornings said, another day’s lace stricken. Really loved these lines also
Great work
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Lucie "What could have made her peaceful with a mind That nobleness made simple as a fire, With beauty like a tightened bow, a kind That is not natural in an age like this, Being high and solitary and most stern? Why, what could she have done, being what she is? Was there another Troy for her to burn?" WB Yeats "No Second Troy" MM Award Winner
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