 Where's the Seed |
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 Sep 2 11, 17:07
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Where's the Seed
Three toed tracks on the crust of new fallen snow, form a strange alphabet. Almost as if asking in this new language where have all the seeds and bugs gone? I understand their hunger as they huddle in the cold, so I stop by the local mom and pop to buy a large bag of seed. Now all the tracks overflow one another around the tin pie plate I filled for my winter feathered friends. 2 Sept. 2011 © Steve Pray |
  
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Sep 4 11, 01:58
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Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
DearSteve,
You soppy so and so. Nice thoughts, well done. Love Alan ·······  ······· |
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Sep 4 11, 17:56
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Alan, yea I know, I used to break for squirrels too. Thanks.
Steve |
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Sep 5 11, 16:30
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Aw!!! Lovely thoughts, Steve.
I was watching a dove eating berries on the Elderberry today and wondering what it would do in winter ... so this kind of followed on my thoughts. Thanks for sharing Snow 
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