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 Greek  Posts: 743 Joined: 3-February 09 From: Abingdon, Oxfordshire,UK Member No.: 754 Real Name: Leonora Wyatt Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:No one at all  |
In this Senyru, the number of dots indicate the length of time the cat watches the mouse hole -
each dot = 10 minutes. I will attempt a comment within the week! =========================================================================== First Revision Senile cat watches those dark,alluring mouseholes... ... meanwhile, mice eat cheese Leo ·······  ······· |
  
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Sekhmet Senile Cat - Senyru Feb 15 09, 12:05 
ohsteve Leo, got to love those sneaky, squeaky meeses to p... Feb 15 09, 12:35 Eisa Hi Leo
I read your reply to Larry's senryu fi... Feb 16 09, 17:03 Larry Hey Leo,
Bring it back and re-post it. To get th... Feb 16 09, 17:28 Sekhmet Good morning Harry and Snow - Thank you both for... Feb 18 09, 03:03 Larry Hi Leo,
There is absolutely nothing wrong (IMO) w... Feb 18 09, 09:51 Psyche Hi Leo!
Great to find you here! But ve... Feb 18 09, 20:27 ace Leo:
Without getting into the comment or no thing... Feb 25 09, 18:16 Sekhmet Hello, and thank you enormously - to all those de... Feb 26 09, 03:50 Larry Hello Leo,
Again I say, "Delightful". ... Feb 26 09, 18:54 
Psyche Hi Leo!
I'm SO pleased you re-posted your... Mar 2 09, 10:05 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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