What happens when a relationship ends? What signals it? What images/moments pop up for you? Show us, don't tell us. You mainly tell us except for the end.
For example, I knew my relationship with my ex was ending when I ceased to think the way he ate his toast - cute. If anything he reminded me of a squirrel with mange and a receding hairline - nibbling dry bread.
I knew he was falling out of lust with me when he told me that my "eyes were too far apart". Huh????
And what the heck is "bed notching"?