Hi Larry
I like the words you have used in this one. The meter flows well but I stumled a bit in L4TimeAs time eludes the rigid grasp of now to trace, in long forgotten yesterdays a trail of memories… regrets. Endow the past with a much finer roseate glaze.
the past with a much finer roseate glaze.
I feel that 'a' here is a bit of a weak beat
It’s footprints fade away in shadowed maze. Ephemeral, yet this infinity ensues without one’s perspicacitySnow
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