 Sweet Harmony's Dance -swap quatrain, revised 3/14/11 |
Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews > Poetry Forums > Fixed Form and Rhyming Poetry for Critique -> Herme's Homilies  |
 Feb 13 11, 08:23
Post
#1
|
|
 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 4,592 Joined: 31-October 03 From: New Jersey Member No.: 39 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Larry Carr  |
SWEET HARMONY’S DANCE
In sweet harmony, two joyful hearts dance, attuned with just an enticing, caring glance; beguiled by sparkling eyes of silken ebony, two joyful hearts dance, in sweet harmony. Amorous voices serenade at the edge of night, echoing lyrical melodies' sentimental delight. We're faithfully together, it's no masquerade! at the edge of night amorous voices serenade. Our fantasies bloomed from a magical potion, a spellbound allure sealed a timeless devotion; an attraction for life is a destiny we presumed, from a magical potion our fantasies bloomed. In our vivid Eden, each day is a precious gift, dawn 'til twilight, embraces give a tender lift; shared passionate raptures never forbidden, each day is a precious gift, in our vivid Eden. Love unfolds anew, we're free of loneliness, dulcet whispers grace a surreal calmness; glorious sunrises are now easier to pursue, we're free of loneliness, love unfolds anew! ·······  ·······Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner             |
  
|
|
|
Feb 13 11, 09:06
Post
#2
|
|
|
Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear John,
My goodness, you have worked hard, and to good effect ! I've hardly tried SQs, I've seen such good ones around, and never felt I wanted to spend so much time perfecting. Well done. Love Alan ······· ······· |
|
|
|
|
Feb 13 11, 09:19
Post
#3
|
|
|
Ornate Oracle Posts: 4,592 Joined: 31-October 03 From: New Jersey Member No.: 39 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Larry Carr |
Alan,
Thanks. The SQ's are very challenging for me but if I can come up with an opening line, then I work on it to see if I can create an opening verse and then go from there...sometimes I give up; this time I fought through the maze. JLY ······· ·······Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner |
|
|
|
|
Feb 16 11, 18:01
Post
#4
|
|
 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Hi John
I'm amazed at how many of these you've written. You are truly an expert now. We'll have to see if Lori is still up for publishing a SQ Chapbook. Snow 
······· ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner      |
|
|
|
|
Feb 16 11, 19:27
Post
#5
|
|
|
Ornate Oracle Posts: 4,592 Joined: 31-October 03 From: New Jersey Member No.: 39 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Larry Carr |
Snow,
Thank you. They are laborious and frustrating to write and they take me more time than the average poem but I have grown to enjoy the form and the challenge that goes with creating one. I do hope Lori finds the time to revisit the SQ project. JLY ······· ·······Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner |
|
|
|
|
Feb 21 11, 14:23
Post
#6
|
|
 Greek Posts: 743 Joined: 3-February 09 From: Abingdon, Oxfordshire,UK Member No.: 754 Real Name: Leonora Wyatt Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:No one at all |
Good evening John - You old romantic you! A charming and passionate SQ.
I have carefully stayed away from this form, but am tempted by your verse to try to work at one - as a challenge to myself. I would imagine that they require rather a lot of thought! Very cleverly done. Hugs, Leo ······· ······· |
|
|
|
|
Feb 21 11, 18:34
Post
#7
|
|
|
Ornate Oracle Posts: 4,592 Joined: 31-October 03 From: New Jersey Member No.: 39 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Larry Carr |
Leo,
Thanks. The form does test you a bit and its not the kind that you can just jump in and start writing cause it can get frustrating. Once in awhile, I will get an opening line that I think will work and I try to make something of it, but it can be a tedious process. JLY ······· ·······Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner |
|
|
|
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:
|
|
Lo-Fi Version | Time is now: 28th April 2024 - 03:01 |
Read our FLYERS - click below
|
| more Quotes |
| ||
|
|
|
|
