Hi Antony
I like this slice of life, which just needs a bit of a tidy up!
Tidy your bedroom the strewn videos are too much.
I feel 'are too much' is unnecessary, perhaps something like
Tidy your bedroom of numerous strewn videos.
The copy of the wall scarab has lost its shine, for the want of diluted bleach it shadows the creeping mildew. Putty your window frame before the draft claims your cold. Your never read poetry collection irregularly resurfaces
Your unread poetry
under the avalanche of your Field studies council brochures. Grannies crocheted blankets needs a spruce,
Grannie's
last addressed when you played Norwegian Woods before the Technics de-powered.
I'm having a last minute tidy up before Xmas. I do hate it, but everything looks so nice afterwards!
Eira
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