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 Dec 8 07, 09:01
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 2,085 Joined: 24-May 04 From: Time, Immoral Member No.: 66 Writer of: Poetry  |
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Merlin sees Red As I was shopping at our local mall for crafts and gifts to give this time of year, I passed the fat man sitting on his rear with kids plunked on his lap – what caterwaul! You’d think one brat was there all by himself. Okay, I’m short and dress distinctively but can’t that kid act more respectfully? I don’t believe he thought I was an elf! Most elves I know don’t wear the latest styles like this fine toga and its matching hat; in fact, that Santa bunch is much too fat and has no fashion sense. They’re juveniles. I am the Wizard. There is Santa Claus. Go yank his beard with your pernicious paws. ·······  ······· |
  
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Congratulations!  This submission has been nominated as a finalist in the fourth annual Mosaic Musings Holiday Classic!  Best of luck!  ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Merlin Merlin Sees Red Dec 8 07, 09:01 
Cleo_Serapis Thank you for your Holiday entry Eric (can you kin... Dec 8 07, 09:33 Merlin These are stand-alone pieces. However, not to be ... Dec 8 07, 16:46 Cleo_Serapis Sure - but midnight is when the 8th ends, Lol... Dec 8 07, 19:22 Merlin Deadline being considered, single topics are creat... Dec 8 07, 20:27 
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