Senryu is a short form of poetry identical in construction to
haiku: (three lines with 17 or fewer syllables with a cut after the first or second line forming two related snapshots of an experience of reality), but is generally about human foibles, while haiku references nature. Senryu need not include a
kigo, or season word, like haiku (though it seems that much of modern English haiku tends toward senryu; that is, unlike traditional Japanese haiku, it may not necessarily adhere to the 5-7-5 syllable form which may be suitable in Japanese, but which tends to produce long or stilted language in English). A simple rule seems to be,
Take a deep breath and read all three lines... cut and all.
I'll offer a couple of examples of my own, however inadequate. Perhaps someone with greater stature would like to add greater insight to this thread.
How I love thee
with breadth, length, depth and height…
but who counts the days?© MLee Dickens'son 11 Oct 2004feeling seventeen
your heart pounds out senryu;
you just can’t beat it© MLee Dickens'son 14 Feb 2004By the way, I understand that they're often with a bit of humor, so I don't think I'm desecrating the form if I wink a bit.
sharin' a bit o' de Light, Daniel