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[Cleo_Serapis]

Hi Snow!  :sun:

I find this piece well crafted. The debate is interesting - perhaps one of the guys will open a thread in the Debate forum for further discussion?

Anyway, I've been meaning to critique, and will come back to do so!  :taco:

In the meanwhile, "Your piece is your own, and when you are comfortable with the results, that's all that matters in the end."

Hugs!

~Cleo

[Guest__*]

Dear Snow,

Forgive our taking up your poem space, but I was the first to tell you what a lovely poem this is, and the grammar thing started when I defended your grammatical honor against a dastardly attack by the anti-contractions police !

Don was complaining that "bloom's" should not be a possesive, and I agreed, cuz it isn't !

I'm sure you understand that grammarians are so theoretical that a descent into matters of matter is necessary to maintain sanity !

Love
Alan

[Guest_Don_*]

Hi Snow,

I sincerely apologize for consuming your space with a paper chase.

I do not police anything.  My goal is to learn from others. Your excellent poem had been quibbled well by the time I arrived, and I commented upon the "bloom's" thing because it was what unduly caught my eye.  Strictly an opinion, which, in that post, I went further to say why I thought it glitchy.

Very nice composition Snow. I've become accustomed to enjoying your compositions, and I am attracted to places displaying your name.

Don

[Eisa]

Hi Snow!  

I find this piece well crafted. The debate is interesting - perhaps one of the guys will open a thread in the Debate forum for further discussion?

Anyway, I've been meaning to critique, and will come back to do so!  

In the meanwhile, "Your piece is your own, and when you are comfortable with the results, that's all that matters in the end."

Hugs!

~Cleo

Hi Lori

Sorry I'm a little  late coming back here.

Yes this would be a good subject for debate if Alan or Don would like to open a thread, it would be interesting to find out other people's opinions. :pharoah2

I agree, if the writer feels comfotable with what they've written at the end...that is what really counts.

Thanks and hugs

Snow  :lovie:

[Eisa]

Dear Snow,

Forgive our taking up your poem space, but I was the first to tell you what a lovely poem this is, and the grammar thing started when I defended your grammatical honor against a dastardly attack by the anti-contractions police !

Don was complaining that "bloom's" should not be a possesive, and I agreed, cuz it isn't !

I'm sure you understand that grammarians are so theoretical that a descent into matters of matter is necessary to maintain sanity !

Love
Alan

Hi Alan

There is no forgiving to do, my poem sparked off some discussion which is good. :pharoah2  When I wrote that line, I didn't even give a thought to bloom's being read as possessive -- I was too engrossed in getting what I felt into meter. I must say I do find grammar annoying when I am trying to get things into a tight meter.

Yes I do remember you were the first to comment on this poem, Alan as is often the case...thankyou  


Love from Snow

[Eisa]

Hi Snow,

I sincerely apologize for consuming your space with a paper chase.

I do not police anything.  My goal is to learn from others. Your excellent poem had been quibbled well by the time I arrived, and I commented upon the "bloom's" thing because it was what unduly caught my eye.  Strictly an opinion, which, in that post, I went further to say why I thought it glitchy.

Very nice composition Snow. I've become accustomed to enjoying your compositions, and I am attracted to places displaying your name.

Don

Hi Don

No need to apologise at all. I feel if my poem sparks a discussion that is a good thing. :pharoah2 As I said to Alan, I had not even given a thought to the possessive nature of bloom's, so I have leaned something too.

I am glad you enjoy my poems...about time I posted another here, I think!

Love from Snow