Welcome Guest ( Log In | Register )

IPB
 
Reply to this topicStart new topic
> An old February X10 challenge, Your Songs - A Sonnet
Larry
post Apr 11 16, 09:37
Post #1


Creative Chieftain
******

Group: Gold Member
Posts: 11,389
Joined: 15-June 07
From: Springfield, Louisiana
Member No.: 446
Real Name: Larry D. Jennings
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:Just wondered in.



Your Songs

My memory lies neither in the stone
etched for uncultured strangers, whose purview
is limited to written words; nor on
sad eulogy. Those never shall imbue

the soul with songs you've planted in my heart
which stem the tide of grief. The angst pervades
each moment of my life that we’re apart
to spoil facades and bittersweet charades.

Yet, here you are, still fresh within my mind
to thwart the black abyss that yawns beside
eternal sleep. The hands of death may bind
the shell in which, no longer, you reside

but there still floats within my dreams each night
your visage, smiling, as your songs take flight.


Words used in order of appearance: memory, uncultured, stone, song, planted, tide, bittersweet, fresh, beside, floats


·······IPB·······

When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy



Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers.
Larry D. Jennings

MM Award Winner
 
+Quote Post  Go to the top of the page
Psyche
post Apr 28 16, 23:17
Post #2


Ornate Oracle
Group Icon

Group: Praetorian
Posts: 8,882
Joined: 27-August 04
From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia
Member No.: 78
Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:David Ting




Another beauty, Larry. So wishful, poignant but at the same time comforting as regards the finale.

"The hands of death may bind
the shell in which, no longer, you reside

but there still floats within my dreams each night
your visage, smiling, as your songs take flight."


That is so true. My late husband wrote poetry, especially sonnets in Spanish, and dedicated several to me. (He also wrote excellent English poems, but not sonnets).

And I often remember them when I'm half-dreaming...that period before awakening that seems so very real.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.

Syl butterfly.gif


·······IPB·······

Mis temas favoritos



The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.


"There is no life higher than the grasstops
Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind
Pours by like destiny, bending
Everything in one direction."

Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights.



Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!

MM Award Winner
 
+Quote Post  Go to the top of the page
Larry
post Jun 2 16, 14:27
Post #3


Creative Chieftain
******

Group: Gold Member
Posts: 11,389
Joined: 15-June 07
From: Springfield, Louisiana
Member No.: 446
Real Name: Larry D. Jennings
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:Just wondered in.



Hi Sylvia,

Again, thank you for the visit and the high praise. I hope you have kept those sonnets your late husband wrote. It would be a pity for them to be lost or misplaced.

A sonnet, written from the heart with love,
is but a song that pleases God above.

Larry


·······IPB·······

When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy



Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers.
Larry D. Jennings

MM Award Winner
 
+Quote Post  Go to the top of the page
Psyche
post Jun 6 16, 00:26
Post #4


Ornate Oracle
Group Icon

Group: Praetorian
Posts: 8,882
Joined: 27-August 04
From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia
Member No.: 78
Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:David Ting



Hi Larry,
You always deserve high praise! Sometimes I'm at a loss for words. There's never anything to crit...

Yes, I've kept all of my husband's poetry. Both sonnets and other forms, in English and Spanish.
They're printed out, in a folder. One never knows what might happen with the Internet!
I also store stuff in a cloud called Dropbox. Plus a complete backup of my computer in an exterior hard disk. It's useful to carry around, because one can plug it in any computer whilst travelling. And right now, this week, I shall have to go shopping for a new computer. Mine just decided to retire...

A sonnet, written from the heart with love,
is but a song that pleases God above.


Wow, I'll keep these lines, if you don't mind.

Syl butterfly.gif



QUOTE (Larry @ Jun 2 16, 16:27 ) *
Hi Sylvia,

Again, thank you for the visit and the high praise. I hope you have kept those sonnets your late husband wrote. It would be a pity for them to be lost or misplaced.

A sonnet, written from the heart with love,
is but a song that pleases God above.

Larry



·······IPB·······

Mis temas favoritos



The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.


"There is no life higher than the grasstops
Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind
Pours by like destiny, bending
Everything in one direction."

Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights.



Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!

MM Award Winner
 
+Quote Post  Go to the top of the page
Larry
post Jun 8 16, 14:16
Post #5


Creative Chieftain
******

Group: Gold Member
Posts: 11,389
Joined: 15-June 07
From: Springfield, Louisiana
Member No.: 446
Real Name: Larry D. Jennings
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:Just wondered in.



No, Sylvia,

I don't mind at all seeing as how I wrote them after another of your glowing bits of praise.

We have a new member from Kiev who joined but didn't post anything yet. I wished her a happy birthday because she just turned 19 a couple of day ago. Perhaps "youth" is becoming bored with the "Social Scene" and will come and add to our membership. One can only hope.

Larry


·······IPB·······

When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy



Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers.
Larry D. Jennings

MM Award Winner
 
+Quote Post  Go to the top of the page
Psyche
post Jun 9 16, 17:12
Post #6


Ornate Oracle
Group Icon

Group: Praetorian
Posts: 8,882
Joined: 27-August 04
From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia
Member No.: 78
Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:David Ting




OK, it's best to have permission. Thank you!

A new member from Kiev? Here at MM?

Geez, I wish more staff would come out of the woodwork, even if a couple of times a week.

Thanks for letting me know.

Cheers, Syl butterfly.gif


·······IPB·······

Mis temas favoritos



The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.


"There is no life higher than the grasstops
Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind
Pours by like destiny, bending
Everything in one direction."

Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights.



Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!

MM Award Winner
 
+Quote Post  Go to the top of the page
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:

Reply to this topicStart new topic

 

RSS Lo-Fi Version Time is now: 28th April 2024 - 09:05




Read our FLYERS - click below



Reference links provided to aid in fine-tuning your writings. ENJOY!

more Quotes
more Art Quotes
Dictionary.com ~ Thesaurus.com

Search:
for
Type in a word below to find its rhymes, synonyms, and more:

Word: