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Jun 30 16, 18:40
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t'your genius here's a toast: place two slices in the toaster slots and depress the handle; wait merely a few minutes and they will pop up nice and brown ready for your special jam session
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Jul 3 16, 14:41
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overtures negate rap
On
volume
exceeds wrong
rhythm with a
tantalizing drum beat
underscored by gunfire
resonating in the air,
echoing through the area.
Silence now follows you into sleep.
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Jul 20 16, 19:50
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Something Pyramidal
sleep on clay mixture for erecting a tall mausoleum housing Nefertiti inside when she is buried near Akhenaton’s area, giving both a tomb which can conceal
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Aug 2 16, 05:19
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heart and soul
seal the deal with handshake and keep your word to maintain your place with those who are trusted and your footsteps will be light as you dance in your neighborhood demonstrating a heart that's on fire
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Aug 2 16, 23:18
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hot footin’
fire walkers have to dance over the coals so their feet don’t burn to prove their bravery and they build up calluses which must be debrided and washed; I’d guess they will use some lava soap.
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Aug 16 16, 13:47
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soap won't help de-bridement; best try divorce unless annulment's still your valid option; of course one has to wonder how you got yourself into this current marital predicament!
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Aug 16 16, 22:13
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men offer excuses in divorces to keep possessions out of the settlement; women offer solutions when getting half of everything and the lawyers leave you with even less
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Aug 20 16, 07:50
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less is more with her gone unless you miss her after it's done and you see your mistakes and you ask her to come back though she agrees with conditions: you have to decide to live with less
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Aug 21 16, 14:23
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life after she leaves
less is both fear and peace enmeshed to cull arrangements you make for life’s panacea; turning shopping on TV each night you wished to watch the game results in credit being worthless
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Sep 21 16, 12:46
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Taken from a pictorial challengecould this satisfy me
curves on a unclad fruit lured me and I devoured the sweetness; taking it for myself, hoping if I left any it would not be merely a dream summoned by my hunger for one bite.
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Sep 28 16, 23:01
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bicuspid’s elongated
bite is still caused by two undead teeth in some girl’s neck too swig, proving this area is dear to Dracula’s heart; depending upon the girl’s age, she will spend centuries in his bed.
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Jan 26 17, 22:04
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biology is deep field
bed inside or outside lets people sleep or plant other stuff, giving new life’s nuclei years to bring lasting pleasure in its growth so seeds you plant will sustain that which is left when you’re dead
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Feb 18 17, 08:07
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DEAD END IS DEPRESSIN'
dead ends be a short trip down deep holes for entrance into strange notions where my loud pleas don't get an answer, or dreams issue forth with pictures where I sense nothing of value to hope in
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Feb 19 17, 00:10
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idea’s form needs work
in due time each new phrase aids what you build, shaping pyramids from a thought which is new or concepts which will echo repeatedly with your reader making them realize they must think
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Sep 6 17, 21:30
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titillate keeping on
think it’s time to elevate ignored forms and help little Nonets that I love to make harder when acrostics added might bring the reader to think about so everyone writing wants to join in
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Sep 18 17, 11:37
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I AID AM TJT NDT SYSTUE
in a word I will not do acrostics any more today; my mind is out of words that I can wonderf'ly post just to get a rise out of you to compose another to stump me
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Sep 19 17, 10:21
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make tower – eye fooled
me and my kinky use evolves itself to triangles so others who follow do what I do and use this tool embarking on acrostic’s guide developing nonets which are hard
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Sep 20 17, 11:30
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HATRED WAS DANGEROUS
hard aura tilted on red tinted ring emanating fire darting about over wings that were reaching into an ominous sky prompting you simply to to stand in fear without words
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Sep 20 17, 18:22
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Words provoke emotions that can bring one places seldom seen and can be heart-warming or detrimentally down to places we wish not to go It is all about perspective, right?
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Sep 20 17, 23:58
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First, I'll answer Daniel's post with one of mine and then will answer Lori's. Whoopee!!! She's back! wonderful sentences
words occlude nuance when disguised import escapes reader’s sense requiring conclusion, false assumptions or cryptic unknown meanings which can require long and intricate explanations
and now - Lori's rise up one test to end
right is nine syllables ending nonet, utilizing eight precludes shortened words so obliterate and expunge niggling little contraction; error line will then be corrected
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