Lori, I would like to nom Alan's poem,
The Laughter of Children.
I thought it very apt, warm and a good use of the form. Even though I have trouble writing in form I can still appreciate them when I read them.
Steve
The Laughter of Children by Alan McAlpine Douglas When life gets you down, you’ve gone grey-green round the gills;
every future is cancelled, you simply can’t cope,
hear the laughter of children, a cure for all ills.
Essentials have run out, never mind simple frills,
you’ve reached rude rock bottom of that slippery slope,
when life's got you down, and you’re grey-green round the gills.
In such deep depression you head for the Black Hills,
you’re completely, it seems, out of best hempen rope,
hear the laughter of children, a cure for all ills.
If, by far, cheeriest sound is massed dentists’ drills
you have scope for a tope. So is there any ? Nope !
When life's got you down, you’ve gone grey-green round the gills.
Gone are your dreams, des res built in Beverley Hills,
there’s pain, bruised your shin, and then slipped on that damn soap;
now, the laughter of children is a cure for all ills ?
Ground exceeding small, by Blake’s satanic massed mills,
and boon there is none, no intercession by Pope;
when life gets you down, you’re quite grey-green round the gills,
hear the laughter of children, my cure for all ills !
Alan McAlpine Douglas