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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
OK - to get the ball rolling in this new forum, I'll post the haiku recently mused in the Karnak Crossing thread: Haiku: new perspectives - have at it folks! I may also post in an image too to go with it....
 Revision 2: magnolia blossoms -- the whisper of wind chimes Revision 1: magnolia blossoms -- wind chimes whisper Original: whispered wind chimes cleanse winter's lethargy -- peaceful concerto 
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Cleo_Serapis Windchimes (revised 29 May) May 26 07, 06:58 
laryalee Hi Cleo!!
It's great to see this new f... May 26 07, 16:41 Eisa I love your haiku Lori and also look forward to th... May 26 07, 18:06 
Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Eisa @ May 26 07, 19:06 ) I love y... May 27 07, 07:00 Cleo_Serapis Hi Lary and welcome to our newest forum and a HUGE... May 27 07, 06:57 Eisa Oh Lori -- what beautiful pictures. I can see now ... May 27 07, 18:08 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Eisa @ May 27 07, 19:08 ) Oh Lori ... May 28 07, 08:04 Don Hi Lori,
For seven syllable second line:
jingles ... May 27 07, 18:42 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Don @ May 27 07, 19:42 ) Hi Lori,
... May 28 07, 08:06 laryalee Ooooh, lovely photos, Cleo!
The second one rem... May 27 07, 22:19 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (laryalee @ May 27 07, 23:19 ) Oooo... May 28 07, 09:03 Kathy What great photographs, Lori! You have quite... May 28 07, 01:00 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Kathy @ May 28 07, 02:00 ) What gr... May 28 07, 09:15 Don Hi Cleo_Serapis,
For my two pence, the word ... May 28 07, 09:30 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Don @ May 28 07, 10:30 ) Hi Cleo_S... May 28 07, 10:20 Eisa magolia blossoms --
wind chimes
whisper
....is my... May 28 07, 09:44 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Eisa @ May 28 07, 10:44 ) magolia ... May 28 07, 10:22 Don Dear Cleo_Serapis,QUOTE What do you 'get' ... May 28 07, 10:59 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Don @ May 28 07, 11:59 ) Dear Cleo... May 28 07, 11:07 Don Hi Cleo_Serapis,
Wow, your photo enlargement is a... May 28 07, 11:21 Cleo_Serapis Thanks Don!
I just added the two I took here ... May 28 07, 13:30 Kathy magnolia blossoms --
wind chimes
whisper
That... May 28 07, 16:22 Cleo_Serapis Hi Kathy.
Thank you very much for all these words... May 29 07, 18:38 Cathy Ohhhhh this is getting very confusing!!... May 28 07, 18:44 Kathy Cathy, read from the start of the thread, and see ... May 29 07, 01:34 Cleo_Serapis Hi Cathy.
Yes, it is confusing ironing out all t... May 29 07, 18:43 laryalee Hi Cleo,
Love your new pics! And the thumbnail... May 28 07, 23:08 Kathy Waa-oh, Lary's suggestion works! Cool... May 29 07, 01:44 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Kathy @ May 29 07, 02:44 ) Waa-oh,... May 29 07, 18:56 Cleo_Serapis Hi Lary.
Thanks, yes, thumbnails are easier to lo... May 29 07, 18:53 Kathy Cleo, a famous haijin (one of Old Masters) said so... May 30 07, 05:51 Kathy Here ya are:
Matsuo Bashō the grand master o... May 30 07, 06:01 AMETHYST First, Lori - I wanted to say how amazing this thr... May 31 07, 01:42 Cleo_Serapis Hi Liz.
Thank you very much! YES, the worksh... Jun 1 07, 04:57 Kathy Brilliant, Liz. You are a quick learner. May 31 07, 02:02 AMETHYST Ah no ... you and Lary are brilliant teachers... May 31 07, 02:12 Kathy Let's congratulate each other then. We are ... May 31 07, 02:23 AMETHYST QUOTE (Kathy @ May 31 07, 03:23 ) Let... May 31 07, 16:22 Kathy Lori, take a look at this, taken from here:
http:... May 31 07, 04:39 laryalee This has been a wonderful thread!
And Liz, you... Jun 1 07, 00:43 Kathy I'm glad you are, Lary. I couldn't handle ... Jun 1 07, 02:34 Cleo_Serapis Hi Kathy.
I think I'm going to start a refern... Jun 1 07, 04:51 laryalee QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Jun 1 07, 02:51 ) O... Jun 1 07, 20:22 Kathy Ha ha, Lori. No, you don't label them 'de... Jun 1 07, 05:49 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Lori on your wizard award winning tile... Nov 4 07, 10:40 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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