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Real Name: Lori Kanter
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Hi all. wave.gif

Liz has permission to post this form here and I think it sounds like a FUN poetic style...

Here's the scoop as stated on Poetry911:

How could a simple six line verse with four iambs in first and second line, two iams in the third, then repeated again in the next three lines, not have been written before?

Anyway, the form is:
4 iambs with end rhyme A
4 iambs with end rhyme A
2 iambs with end rhyme B
4 iambs with end rhyme C
4 iambs with end rhyme C
2 iambs with end rhyme B
Where usually some kind of summary or counterpoint to the two preceding lines goes on the B line.

Liz summarizes this new form as:
QUOTE
The requirements are iambic meter...

Line Length is 884884 for each stanza
the rhyme scheme goes AABCCB ...

Its fun! wink.gif

Hugs, Liz


Here is an example from Liz....


All In The Mind...


The moon is full; an airy light
encircles it this eerie night.
A blood red ring.
The strangest shadow passes by
it floats across a blackened sky.
What was that thing?

I shiver; still I walk along
and look about--the shadows gone.
Afraid to see.
There's an evil presence a foot
a distant owl begins to hoot.
It's calling me.

When up ahead a witch on broom
begins to fly toward the moon.
A cackling caw.
She screeched and scowled into the dark,
it echoed through the streets and park.
Her hand a claw.

Her wicked hand reached out to me.
she tried to grab hold of my tee.
I raced away.
I headed home, and slammed the door
She could've followed, I'm not sure.
Here's where I'll stay.

The midnight hour had struck the clock
at twelve...ding dong, had sung tick tock.
What did this mean?
I hid beneath the candy seat,
and heard a voice say trick or treat...
It's Halloween!  ghostface.gif

Why not try it!
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- Cleo_Serapis   Logarhyme   Oct 19 04, 16:06
- - JustDaniel   Ah, could be it be an occident or just another pre...   Oct 19 04, 17:26
- - Cleo_Serapis   Excellent and a speedy reply Daniel~san! Cool! I...   Oct 19 04, 17:36
- - JustDaniel   No one's surprised you've not the time to ...   Oct 21 04, 13:03
- - Cybele   Hello everyone,   Looks like fun. Just a quicki...   Oct 22 04, 16:00
- - JustDaniel   Hmmm, Grace has joined another form; ya think ere ...   Oct 23 04, 01:08
- - Cleo_Serapis    Divine Traditions   There was a time when Druid...   Oct 25 04, 18:53
- - Cybele   Hello Lori, This is just great. Although we do...   Oct 26 04, 03:17
- - JustDaniel   You said it well, my buddy Grace, but LogaRhymin...   Oct 26 04, 07:30
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel,   Now lookie ‘ere me yankee pal yer ...   Oct 26 04, 12:20
- - JustDaniel   You've got me laughin' up a storm! The...   Oct 26 04, 13:24
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- - Cybele   Hi Daniel, QUOTE I ain't done LogaRhymin' ...   Jul 29 05, 06:03
- - JustDaniel   Greetings, your Grace! Please allow this land...   Jul 29 05, 11:30
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|- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Liz. Boy is this one hitting home! I must make...   Jul 23 06, 06:20
- - AMETHYST   Thank you Lori, I haven't written anything in so...   Jul 23 06, 17:55
- - JustDaniel   "I don't remember childhood years" ...   Jul 24 06, 07:49
|- - AMETHYST   QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Jul 24 06, 12:49 ) "I...   Aug 6 06, 22:40
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|- - AMETHYST   QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Aug 7 06, 06:55 ) Thi...   Aug 7 06, 11:59
|- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Aug 7 06, 12:59 ) .... ...   Aug 7 06, 14:25
- - AMETHYST   On This Night- Logarhyme Tonight's the night, I ...   Oct 5 06, 14:53
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