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 Oct 8 07, 00:41
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 Babylonian  Posts: 80 Joined: 3-August 04 From: Richfield, Utah Member No.: 74 Writer of: Poetry  |
Celebrate Christ, the Christmas season begins,
He was sent to earth to save us from our sins. Sent to us from God up above, the ultimate display of His love. Walking this earth, and then He died, imagine the tears that Mary cried. Though she knew it was God’s plan, to wash away the sins of man. You know that it would not be right, to forget to celebrate Him tonight. Be sure you don’t turn Him away, He will help you not to stray. We all know that He did no wrong, to be put to death by an angry throng. But He will walk among us all once more, when we reach the other side of Heaven’s door. ·······  ·······Jim AKA Rapid-Fire Publisher/Editor of WRITE ON!! Poetry Magazette
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Oct 8 07, 05:22
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Thank you for your Holiday entry Jim!
 Best of luck!  May the 'classic' holiday spirit be shared in your heart throughout the season!  ~ Mosaic Musings Staff         ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Oct 8 07, 17:33
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 Assyrian Posts: 271 Joined: 21-July 07 From: somewhere twixt 'n' tween Member No.: 456 Real Name: Sam Richmond Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:N/A |
Touching take on the 'original' Christmas story. I'd like to see He, Him with caps throughout, just the way I was raised. Good poem, I believe it is very sincere.
Best of luck in the competition. Sam ······· ······· Values are to integrity as spirit to spirituality ... the one is needed that the other is sustained ~ Sam
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Oct 8 07, 23:42
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Babylonian Posts: 80 Joined: 3-August 04 From: Richfield, Utah Member No.: 74 Writer of: Poetry |
Thanks Cleo and Sam. You are right, I blew it. I believe all the proper capitals have been inserted now..........
······· ·······Jim AKA Rapid-Fire Publisher/Editor of WRITE ON!! Poetry Magazette
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