QUOTE(Aphrodite @ Feb. 20 2004, 16:42)
QUOTE(Athena @ Feb. 20 2004, 03:11)
Visualizing
I sit
contemplating
returning to your arms
wondering how soon it will be
hurry
© D R Harris - 19 February 2004
Hello Dolly~
You have me wanting to write a cinquain. (haven't in a long while)
In your brevity, you bring passionate imagery with a strong ending.
I love the title too as it sets the stage well.
An excellent cinquain, indeed! :pharoah2 :pharoah2
Blessings~
Lindi Hi Lindi.
Thank you so very much for your always welcome and encouraging comments!
Yes, why not write a cinquain? We have the interactive thread and the regular thread or post one in the crit threads or all of the above! :laugh: :dance:
Why not? I'll sure rush to read!
Hugs,
Dolly :pharoah: