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> The Hamburger Bun Had To Pay (Episode # 2), Humor
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post Aug 22 04, 22:56
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Got a little more detail to provide today,
the beef decided that bun had to pay.
Revenge of the hamburger bun indeed,
don't stop now,  continue to read.

You see that beef was covered in grease,
a desire to get even that would not cease.
Made that bun as soggy as could be,
it fell to the floor, as you can see.

There was a "Hot" dog that gobbled it down,
that bun knew it had been such a clown.
Thinking that I would ever get revenge,
when that dog was on a hunger binge.

If it's ever reincarnated, I have heard that,
it's going to come back as a cowboy hat.
Doubt that will ever happen to a soggy bun,
but you must admit, the idea is fun......


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post Oct 12 04, 19:32
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Hi Jim! wave.gif

Finally had a chance to read part 2 and now must go and read part 3 - what next - a corn dog? :wink:

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