Very good, Antony!
Original and well expressed. The second stanza is slightly amusing, but all the same one can capture N's suffering throughout. I'd never allow a framed photo of my partner's ex in my bedroom! I'd smash it...
BTW, you need a full stop after photograph.
The idea of bleaching her hair to enliven the future is fantastic. Love it.
Syl
QUOTE (greenwich @ Oct 15 16, 16:15 )
It's unsettling sleeping with you in the dark
only seeing the white of your eyes.
This is not the same as feelings.
I thought I had done enough
inquiring about your children,
your son the reticent reader.
I bought him a history book.
I sense
I'm falling through two mattresses.
Your's is the cruelest confusion
still hankering after your ex.
A solitary figure in destruction.
I secretly shudder at his framed photograph
If only this monochrome world could go,
even bleaching your hair
could enliven the future.