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 Nov 18 16, 11:53
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 Trojan  Posts: 859 Joined: 27-October 10 From: Havelock Ontario Canada Member No.: 1,150 Real Name: Denis Barter Writer of: Poetry  |
Throughout The Ages of Gaia, many changes made,
have intrigued and mystified the sober and staid, so this will be A Tangled Tale I now weave, of Sylvie and Bruno who, would you believe, were Listening to The Music of the Spheres, when The Canterville Ghost too, so one hears, was accompanied by The Young King, just as The English Patient, joined in to sing. Next The Fisherman and his Soul-ful dirge, brought The Selfish Giant, to the very verge of tears! This on a Small Island, where he’d overheard the God of Small Things, tell a passing bird, that the Rape of The Fair Country, where Angel’s Ashes were being strewn, here and there, had caused The Blood of Flowers to flow. Surely this will be a heart breaking Tale of woe! Rhymer. November 18th, 2016. (Better late than never? Maybe? Lol!) Book Titles as used: The Ages of Gaia, A Tangled Tale, Sylvie and Bruno, The Music of the Spheres The Canterville Ghost, The Young King, The English Patient,The Fisherman and his Soul, The Selfish Giant, Small Island, The God of Small Things, Rape of the Fair Country, Angela's Ashes, The Blood of Flowers. |
  
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Nov 29 16, 23:06
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 8,877 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Hi Denis, it's me again, curious to see whether you've posted elsewhere. There's always Plato's Pearls of Wisdom, where authors do not receive critiques or suggestions. It's the place to show your poems, not a work-shopping forum. And yes, I've been in websites full of obnoxious wannabe poets. But sometimes a suggestion is useful, so I tweak my poem accordingly. I don't even bother to answer the rude ones... LOL. My own poetry is more of a way to express my thoughts, nothing exceptional. It does me good to concentrate on my work, especially in these alarming times. Larry is the one to appeal for help with sonnets, villanelles, etc. He's enormously appreciated. Do come around again, best, Sylvia  ·······  ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner              |
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Trojan Posts: 859 Joined: 27-October 10 From: Havelock Ontario Canada Member No.: 1,150 Real Name: Denis Barter Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE (Psyche @ Nov 29 16, 23:06 )  Hi Denis, it's me again, curious to see whether you've posted elsewhere. There's always Plato's Pearls of Wisdom, where authors do not receive critiques or suggestions. It's the place to show your poems, not a work-shopping forum. And yes, I've been in websites full of obnoxious wannabe poets. But sometimes a suggestion is useful, so I tweak my poem accordingly. I don't even bother to answer the rude ones... LOL. My own poetry is more of a way to express my thoughts, nothing exceptional. It does me good to concentrate on my work, especially in these alarming times. Larry is the one to appeal for help with sonnets, villanelles, etc. He's enormously appreciated. Do come around again, best, Sylvia |
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Rhymer A Library Collection. Nov 18 16, 11:53 
Psyche Hi Rhymer!
Yes, better late than never... L... Nov 22 16, 17:57 Rhymer Thanks for your comment Psyche, it is much appreci... Nov 24 16, 07:32 Larry Hi Dennis,
Glad you picked up on an older challen... Nov 25 16, 11:22 
Rhymer Hi Sylvia and Larry.
Firstly it would seem my ser... Dec 5 16, 10:43 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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