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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
  Aug 9 04, 08:48
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Crown Jewels Award
 Celtic Castle Designs Shrouded Echoes, A midnight luminescence veils the sea, it twinkles, bobbing in reflective rays. Celestial constellations in ballet as diamonds pas de duex in blackened tea. The moonlight skims across the crested waves... a phosphorescent glow of rippling foam, beneath the creatures effortlessly roam uncounted depths of salty water graves. Now through a liquid skyline sunrays peek, the sea’s so calm, with not a wave in sight. As wispy clouds disperse in wingless flight the day is new with glory that will speak. Aside a piece of driftwood floats on by, a gull was perched there, hesitant to fly. |
  
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Aug 15 04, 08:06
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Larry! :knight:
This is absolutely stunning (as I've mentioned previously)! :lovie: I have so many favorite images, it's hard to choose just one! :wall: If I mus, it would be: Celestial constellations in ballet as diamonds pas de duex in blackened tea. What a great imagination! Glad you've put one this in the Polished works place to stay! :wizard: ~Cleo :cloud9: ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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| Guest_Taita_* |
Oct 3 04, 20:42
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Hey Zeus,
This was a pleasure to read for some of the descriptive/adventurous language. It flows beautifully and the images are quite haunting...the big deep. An excellent effort :dance: :grinning: |
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Mar 24 05, 21:48
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 Assyrian  Posts: 203 Joined: 3-August 03 Member No.: 11 Real Name: Beth Writer of: Poetry |
Ah, Zeus,
You have me swooning with your mastery of the romantic! What a way with words, you silvered tongued-devil, you! You have me bewitched, entranced. Too bad I'm married! Hey, if you could sweep me away to this place, I may conveniently forget that little factoid ('specially since my wedding ring is broken!!!) LOVE YOU, Bud! Nef ······· ·······I am who I am.
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Mar 26 05, 15:17
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
Hello Larry~
This is an absolutely sparkling piece bringing me into a wonderful and ethereal state of mind!  The moonlight skims across the crested waves... a phosphorescent glow of rippling foam, beneath the creatures effortlessly roam uncounted depths of salty water graves Superb write!  Blessings~ Lindi ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Mar 29 05, 11:30
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DRB,
thanks for your comments and stopping by. Larry |
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Mar 29 05, 11:32
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Miss Nef,
ready to be swept away huh!!! Just perch on that driftwood, and I will be by to pick you up. Glad you liked this. Hugs Larry 
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Mar 29 05, 11:34
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Hi Lindi,
Thanks for the wonderful comments. I must have been in my ethereal mood that day. Hugs Larry
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| Guest_Ivy Rose_* |
Apr 3 05, 20:17
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This is a brilliant work. Dazzling imagery and fantastic poetics make this poem an absolute delight to read.
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Apr 5 05, 14:06
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Hi Sharon,
Thank you for your nice comments. This was a labor of love. Larry 
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Apr 5 05, 18:47
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Congrat on your Crown Jewels award winning tile Larry!
   Well done! ~Cleo 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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| Guest_Jox_* |
 Apr 5 05, 18:52
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Hi Larry,
I'm delighted that you have an award for this piece - both for yourself and for me - because it has brought it to my attention - I hadn't seen it before. Very well done and very well written. James. |
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| Guest_Toumai_* |
Apr 6 05, 02:49
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Hi Larry,
This is very beautiful. Congratulations on your award.  Fran |
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Apr 6 05, 17:17
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Lor,
my humble thanks for the award. Hugs Larry
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Apr 6 05, 17:19
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James,
appreciate your kind words and comments. Thank you, Larry :) |
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| Guest_Zeus˛_* |
Apr 6 05, 17:20
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Fran,
Thank you for your wonderful comments. Larry
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