Hi Antony,
Wonderful imagery in this one. What a wonderful way to begin
From our shell we emerge scattering words like confetti.
From our shell we emerge scattering words like confetti. We only needed papyrus to safeguard permanence. full stop Yesterday had the better scope, comma truthful memory. Instead today seems uncertain, an omen of a bad sunrise follows, delving like a bare Buddha, we've uncoupled Heaven regaling the tongues of shadows. Why such a profusion of imagery ? Hadn't we braved a river, barely emerging we should have woken.
Not much to nit here, Antony
Eira
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