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Apr 5 16, 11:12
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By journey's end the scythes will have rusted. How they long to be preserved for gratitude of use. But such is life wheat and chaff thrashed together in the same breath. The Willows languish by the silted pool they never had their season. Just when we thought the highway would take us this omen runs.
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Apr 6 16, 02:01
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Interesting, Antony. Not sure I understand where you're going, but I certainly like your word usage. Just one nit, I think.
QUOTE (greenwich @ Apr 5 16, 13:12 ) By journeys end the scythes will have rusted. <<<<<<<journey's How they long to be preserved for gratitude of use. But such is life <<<<<<cliché?wheat and chaff thrashed together in the same breath. <<<<<<good biblical ref. 'Separate the wheat from the chaff'...The Willows languish by the silted pool <<<<<<comma.they never had their season. Just when we thought the highway would take us this omen runs <<<<<Full stop. Not sure of your meaning, but I like it all the same! Can you enlighten me a little? Tx, Syl
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner
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Apr 6 16, 11:42
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This is about the road to death and taking into account past justice and future luck needed for this. The scythe is also the human body, the cyclical function of living, thus wheat and chaff are the mixtures in life, the flow of justice
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Apr 7 16, 18:02
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Ornate Oracle
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Hi again, Antony, Now I understand it perfectly, thank you. Should have on my own. Really good, this one. I like 'wheat and chaff are the mixtures of life' ...quite so, not easy or even possible to separate. Syl
QUOTE (greenwich @ Apr 6 16, 14:42 ) This is about the road to death and taking into account past justice and future luck needed for this. The scythe is also the human body, the cyclical function of living, thus wheat and chaff are the mixtures in life, the flow of justice
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner
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Apr 7 16, 18:11
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Ornate Oracle
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BTW, where is everybody? I wish Lori, our Administrator, would make an appearance. Poetry websites don't function when the boss is not around. Moderators are not enough. We can only deal with certain matters, such as being vigilant about who comes in, move posts on request or necessity, answer PM's, etc. I've sent a PM to Lori but received no answer. I think she's OK, because she's busy on Facebook with other interests. I don't visit FB very often, but might do so to ask her why she's AWOL...
My view is that FB is the downfall of many poetry websites. I've visited some and they're OK, but slow. But the Admins. are always around, every day. That shows that somebody cares, don't you think?
Syl
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner
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Apr 9 16, 05:03
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Thank you Heather and Syl. I am very grateful for your interest in my words.
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Apr 9 16, 18:12
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Hi Antony,
Beautiful thoughts here. I love your use of the scythe and the wheat and chaff. It also reminds me of the grim reaper coming with his scythe at the journeys end.
I have to agree that such is life is cliché
These lines are beautiful
The Willows languish by the silted pool they never had their season.
By journey's end the scythes will have rusted. How they long to be preserved for gratitude of use. But such is life wheat and chaff thrashed together in the same breath. The Willows languish by the silted pool they never had their season. Just when we thought the highway would take us this omen runs.
I always enjoy your poems, Antony. Short, but filled with plenty to think about
Eira
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