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Oct 28 15, 07:51
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As my dog died recently, I've come back to this one as I had done some tweaking and not posted it since. Also as to the title, as Posthumous said this is written to the dog, not for the dog. Does this matter? or should I change the title, perhaps to -
Hymn to an Aging Dog
You pushed into life as I slept, flashed past my inner eye, chasing a tabby away from our Braeburn tree.
Four years on, I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you.
I will not forget -
my husband lay prostrate in ripples, so you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out.
May you drift away in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. When death arrives, leash in hand
may He gather you gently, not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed.
----------------------- recent tweaks
I will not forget moved into a separate line
May you drown in reveries changed to May you drift away in reveries ------------------------------------------- Prayer for an Aging Dog
You pushed into life as I slept, appeared to me in a vision, chasing a tabby away from the Braeburn tree.
Four years on, I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you. I will mot forget -
my husband lay prostrate in ripples, so you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out.
May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. When death arrives, leash in hand
may He gather you gently, not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed. --------------------------------------------- Just a note of explanation to this poem.
a week after our old Collie died, I had a dream about a Dalmatian running in our garden & joked it was a premonition. 4 years later I was looking for a new dog (not a Dalmatian) but then I found Max on the internet, in a rescue home and had to fetch him! It turned out that he was born the week I had that dream. Strange, eh? Then of course he played his part in saving my husband's life.
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You slipped into life as I slept and appeared to me in a vision, chasing a tabby from beneath the Braeburn tree. Four years passed;
I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you. At times you have stirred up storms, but I will not forget
when my husband lay prostrate in ripples, you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out.
May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. When death arrives, leash in hand,
may he gather you gently, not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed.
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Hi Snow,
I'm not much on giving a critique in a FV forum but your subject matter brought back memories and tears of our beloved pet "aging dog" who passed a number of years ago. She was a "shelter" dog of about four or five years of age but a beautiful tri-colored sheltie we named Ladybug. She was a Lady in every sense of the word and the most avid dig-in-the-dirt bug you could imagine. Thus the name. Though totally frightened of our full sized stuffed Bengal Tiger (toy) when she came home with us, they soon became fast friends and the tiger worked very well and a pillow of choice throughout her lifetime. At the age of 14 or 15, after a vacation to Grand Isle, Louisiana, she went to sleep forever on that tiger.
May your little hero go to "doggie Heaven" in as peaceful a manner.
My prayers go out across the pond to you and yours.
Larry
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Oct 30 15, 00:40
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Hi Eira, So glad to see you've posted again, on a bittersweet note. Knowing the story of how Max saved your husband from drowning makes this poem all the more emotionally charged for me. Just some questions lower down.
QUOTE (Eisa @ Oct 28 15, 10:51 ) Prayer for an Aging Dog
You slipped into life as I slept and appeared to me in a vision, chasing a tabby from beneath the Braeburn tree. Four years passed;
Would you mind explaining a little here. This S1 has great imagery, but I don't understand it all, especially "Four years passed;"
I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you. <<<<< I get confused as to the lineal sequence of events. S1 made me think you already owned Max, but here it's evident that you adopted him. Yet you recognised his "huge pirate patch". Maybe in your dream he had that patch? Sorry, I'm going round in circles...LOL...
At times you have stirred up storms, <<<<Dogs do!! Mine used to dig deep holes in the garden. She'd also dive into our swimming-pool and splash around with Patrick!
but I will not forget
when my husband lay prostrate in ripples, you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out. <<<< Can't comment here. Not now. Such a mighty picture before my eyes. Probably because you told us how it all happened. Max has been one of my heroes ever since.
May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. <<<<<Lovely. When death arrives, leash in hand,
may he gather you gently, <<<<<Is death masculine? Can't think now, but maybe gender can be omitted. TorT not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed. Yes, let's pray your dear, aging dog slips away in his sleep. It's so upsetting to have one's pets put down by a Vet. Your poem comes over as a heartfelt, loving piece. I'll come back. I have one or two suggestions to make, but would rather sleep on them...LOL...
Hugs, Syl***
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Oct 30 15, 08:50
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QUOTE (Larry @ Oct 30 15, 02:21 ) Hi Snow,
I'm not much on giving a critique in a FV forum but your subject matter brought back memories and tears of our beloved pet "aging dog" who passed a number of years ago. She was a "shelter" dog of about four or five years of age but a beautiful tri-colored sheltie we named Ladybug. She was a Lady in every sense of the word and the most avid dig-in-the-dirt bug you could imagine. Thus the name. Though totally frightened of our full sized stuffed Bengal Tiger (toy) when she came home with us, they soon became fast friends and the tiger worked very well and a pillow of choice throughout her lifetime. At the age of 14 or 15, after a vacation to Grand Isle, Louisiana, she went to sleep forever on that tiger.
May your little hero go to "doggie Heaven" in as peaceful a manner.
My prayers go out across the pond to you and yours.
Larry Hi Larry, its good to hear from you and don't say that about your critiquing FV as you have always been a help to me in the past. Thank you for telling me about your Ladybug (love that name) and how she had her final sleep on her tiger. Max is coming up to 14yrs, has arthritis but also an enlarged liver which is the main problem. I hope he will, like Ladybug just drift away in his sleep. Eira
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Oct 30 15, 08:53
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Hi Syl.
Just to let you know I've been here & will reply to your comments in full tonight when I'll have more time.
Hugs Eira
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Oct 30 15, 16:16
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Prayer for an Aging Dog
You slipped into life as I slept and appeared to me in a vision, chasing a tabby from beneath the Braeburn tree. Four years passed;
I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you.
I understand this, but I find "slipped into life" distracting. The poetry here is from the psychic oddness, not from turns of phrase. Also, the similarity of "slipped" and "slept" makes the line hiss too much.
At times you have stirred up storms, but I will not forget
this line feels a bit like filler. it is not saying much and then it is enjambed across a stanza break
when my husband lay prostrate in ripples, you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out.
another good story. I think the stories are the strength (and heart) of this poem.
May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. When death arrives, leash in hand,
may he gather you gently, not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed.
"but dreaming" feels like another filler line. I would suggest more consistency with the lines. Or less consistency. Make it clear that every line is a different breath. But that would be a more major change.
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Oct 30 15, 17:10
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QUOTE (Psyche @ Oct 30 15, 05:40 ) Hi Eira, So glad to see you've posted again, on a bittersweet note. Knowing the story of how Max saved your husband from drowning makes this poem all the more emotionally charged for me. Just some questions lower down. Hi Syl, it's great to see you too. Yes Max is very special and is doing quite well at the moment (under his circumstances)
QUOTE (Eisa @ Oct 28 15, 10:51 ) Prayer for an Aging Dog
You slipped into life as I slept and appeared to me in a vision, chasing a tabby from beneath the Braeburn tree. Four years passed;
Would you mind explaining a little here. This S1 has great imagery, but I don't understand it all, especially "Four years passed;"
St1 is about when Max was born & this was at the time I had my dream (appeared to me in a vision) Then 4 years later we found him & adopted him. (I'm not explaining this very well) I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you. <<<<< I get confused as to the lineal sequence of events. S1 made me think you already owned Max, but here it's evident that you adopted him. Yet you recognised his "huge pirate patch". Maybe in your dream he had that patch? Sorry, I'm going round in circles...LOL... No, in St1 he appeared in my dream At times you have stirred up storms, <<<<Dogs do!! Mine used to dig deep holes in the garden. She'd also dive into our swimming-pool and splash around with Patrick! Yes Max has been very challenging at times but I will not forget
when my husband lay prostrate in ripples, you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out. <<<< Can't comment here. Not now. Such a mighty picture before my eyes. Probably because you told us how it all happened. Max has been one of my heroes ever since.
May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. <<<<<Lovely. When death arrives, leash in hand,
may he gather you gently, <<<<<Is death masculine? Can't think now, but maybe gender can be omitted. TorT not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed. Now I never thought about whether death was masculine or feminine. I suppose I was thinking of the grim reaper - masculine.Yes, let's pray your dear, aging dog slips away in his sleep. It's so upsetting to have one's pets put down by a Vet. Your poem comes over as a heartfelt, loving piece. I'll come back. I have one or two suggestions to make, but would rather sleep on them...LOL...
Hugs, Syl*** Thanks Syl. Max is doing quite well at the moment. He'll be 14yrs in December. We thought he might not make Xmas, but now I feel ore optimistic. Look forward to your return. Hugs Eira
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Oct 30 15, 17:16
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Hi Posty,
It seems strange to see you here ... but very nice!
Thank you for passing on your thoughts here. You have given me lots to chew over - even if I do have to make major changes.
Eira
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Oct 31 15, 17:29
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Hi
there's something wonderfully cyclic about the piece which the sustained tempo drives along. Also, something of the dream quality, something of the relationship that sometimes exists between dogs and humans...
A friend of mine was a shepherd, had an instinctive relationship with his (working) dog. When Dave developed epilepsy, Ben stopped being a sheepdog and became the guardian, signalling imminent attacks in some psychic metaphysic way. This reminds me...
Drowning in reverie indeed
Mike
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Nov 1 15, 19:09
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QUOTE (posthumous @ Oct 31 15, 13:53 ) one more thing I wanted to say, though it might be insignificant to you. It's not really a prayer for the dog. It's a prayer TO the dog, because you're talking to the dog. I did kind of think that the other day - hoped with poetic licence I might get away with it. LOL! Perhaps I'll rethink the title. Eira
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Nov 1 15, 19:17
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Hi Mike
How wonderful to hear of your friend and his relationship with his dog. Dogs are so intelligent - in a way that humans aren't (if you know what I mean)
I'm glad this reminded you ...
Eira
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Hi Snow, I enjoyed the somber tone of this and feel free verse is the best choice for the narrator here. I often shy away from critiquing FV - so will just offer a few thoughts for now to TorT as you wish. I'll be back again soon! You slipped into life as I slept and appeared to me in a vision, chasing a tabby from beneath the Braeburn tree. Four years passed; I am not certain of the context using the word 'slipped' in the opening line? To me it sounds like it was by accident - I would rather liek to see a differnt word there, perhaps, Your life... as first line and then delete 'and' from L2?I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you. **I can almost see this as its own stanza** At times you have stirred up storms, but I will not forget
when my husband lay prostrate in ripples, you howled ceaselessly until **Here, I would move 'until' down to L3 or perhaps say something like "when my husband lay prostrate in ripples, you howled ceaselessly until your voice -- carried along the bank was answered. Hotfooted, they rushed in and dragged him out."**they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out.May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. When death arrives, leash in hand, may he gather you gently, not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed.**If he is 'God', please capitalize.
Enjoyed! ~Cleo
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Nov 6 15, 19:06
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Hi Lori,
Thanks for calling by with your thoughts. I have made a few edits and still thinking on this one.
I did wonder about the 'slipped' for birth.
Hope to post another poem soon.
Eira
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Feb 24 16, 18:12
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My dog Max died recently (I'm sorry it had to be the potion) and I felt I had to bring up my last tweaked version for a final time.
Eira
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Feb 24 16, 23:51
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Hi Eisa,
Love your poem to Max, with the pirate eye-patch! So sad. I know his life-story now, so I understand your piece perfectly. I've also seen your photos of him on FB. The title is correct now, maybe you'll want to edit it "up top"..
So sorry it had to be the potion, but I see that he slipped away as if he'd been sleeping. I had to do the same with my last female dog, Cheetah. She was a dog my son had brought in, but then he went off to study in Spain and I inherited her. She knew all my time-tables, same as the cat I have now!
We all have our doggie stories, so...My late husband, Carlos, always said he disliked pets and other people's children...LOL. He took no notice of her at all, but in less than a month she'd wangled her way into his heart! Promptly at 6 a.m. she'd nudge him to get out of bed (he was a physician), then he'd take her for a walk along with the 'doggie bag'...and on the way he'd buy her biscuits, in summer it would be ice-cream, which they shared!! The incredible thing is that she'd recognize the sound of his car when he returned. We lived on a 2nd. floor apartment and she'd rush to the door to greet him! She even knew the sound when Carlos unlocked the big entrance door to the building. People came in and out most of the day, but even if he returned at an irregular time, she knew...
Just two comments: In S2, L4, "I'll not forget - " sounds as if you're referring to the previous lines. You seem to have it clearer in your original version. Just me, ToT.
I'm also not sure about 'drown in reverie'. Perhaps it's because I know your husband nearly drowned during that accident, when Max saved him. Maybe 'drift off', 'doze off'? Just me, again.
Last comment: I see you've Cap'd God, which I love since I'm sure God has a place for all our loved ones close by us, but my point is that in the previous line it reads "When death arrives, leash in hand(,)" it sounds more like the Grim Reaper, not God.
I'm sorry, Eisa, you've only put **, toss out all!
This is a beautiful tribute to your adored Max. I'm so glad you've been able to write to him and I'm sure he'll understand and continue to be your family's guardian angel in heaven.
Many hugs, Syl***
QUOTE (Eisa @ Oct 28 15, 10:51 ) As my dog died recently, I've come back to this one as I had done some tweaking and not posted it since. Also as to the title, as Posthumous said this is written to the dog, not for the dog. Does this matter? or should I change the title, perhaps to -
Hymn to an Aging Dog
You pushed into life as I slept, flashed past my inner eye, chasing a tabby away from our Braeburn tree.
Four years on, I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you. I will not forget -
my husband lay prostrate in ripples, so you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out.
May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. When death arrives, leash in hand
may He gather you gently, not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed.
------------------------------------------- Prayer for an Aging Dog
You pushed into life as I slept, appeared to me in a vision, chasing a tabby away from the Braeburn tree.
Four years on, I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you. I will mot forget -
my husband lay prostrate in ripples, so you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out.
May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. When death arrives, leash in hand
may He gather you gently, not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed. --------------------------------------------- Just a note of explanation to this poem.
a week after our old Collie died, I had a dream about a Dalmatian running in our garden & joked it was a premonition. 4 years later I was looking for a new dog (not a Dalmatian) but then I found Max on the internet, in a rescue home and had to fetch him! It turned out that he was born the week I had that dream. Strange, eh? Then of course he played his part in saving my husband's life.
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You slipped into life as I slept and appeared to me in a vision, chasing a tabby from beneath the Braeburn tree. Four years passed;
I recognised your huge pirate patch and we rushed seventy miles to adopt you. At times you have stirred up storms, but I will not forget
when my husband lay prostrate in ripples, you howled ceaselessly until they heard further along the bank and ran hotfoot to drag him out.
May you drown in reverie of bounding by the river with us before you paddle in to lap. When death arrives, leash in hand,
may he gather you gently, not with a merciful potion, but dreaming on your jungle green bed.
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner
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Feb 26 16, 16:56
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Thank you for your lovely long response, Syl. I'm afraid my reply is short as I've been responding to other's poems.
The places you suggested changes are ones I have thought about too, so I'm glad you mentioned them.
I've made the changes
Thanks Syl Eira
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Feb 27 16, 02:40
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Lovely, Eisa!
No more nits from me. My heart also goes out to you and your family, from across the big, wide ocean.
Fortunately, you have your lizards, geckos and snakes to keep you busy. These also have their own personalities. I know, because long ago we had a large acquarium, water snakes included. Oh, and in a pond we had snapping water-turtles...not so fond of them when they grew large. Scary to feed them.
Syl***
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner
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