***I think in Turco's, the English Sonnet begins this form, but I think it is more symmetrical starting with the Terza rima.
***revised
Lore of the Rings
A sapling’s breached the fallen season’s womb
and climbs above our quilted sacrifice;
tomorrow rises from a winter tomb.
Sweet sunshine bathes my limbs; I want to bask.
As wind’s caressing fingers tickle me,
warm droplets freely fall from heaven’s flask.
Green shoots and pithy trunk: I am a treeThough spring traverses softly-- hurls no ice
to thwart a sapling’s vim or test his sap,
let’s share a shady branch of wise advice.
a tree, a tree, a tree, a pillar bound
to touch the vaulted sky, deliberate
with clouds and house songbirds that flit around
this grove. I need no guidance- life is great.While summer aims to sear our leaves and zap
our vigor, gusts of autumn crook our boughs
and sudden blizzards force November’s nap.
But soon I bow to prudent shadows in
an August drought and dodge brisk gales behind
a massive trunk. As elder trees begin
to draw their sap to earth, I match my kind.Our sapling hears as ancient groans espouse
the wisdom found in bands of weathered rings
and hidden pools our deepest roots can dowse.
A tree must learn the lessons trees accrue
to scale toward zeniths held in cloud and blue.To reach the height of noble wooded kings,
a sprout must delve as far to tap wellsprings.
***original
The Lore of the Rings
The sapling’s breached the fallen season’s womb
and climbs above our quilted sacrifice;
the future rises from a winter tomb.
The sunshine bathes my limbs; I want to bask.
The wind’s caressing fingers tickle me
and droplets freely fall from heaven’s flask.
Green shoots and pithy trunk: I am a treeThough spring traverses softly- hurls no ice
to thwart the sapling’s vim or test his sap,
let’s share a shady branch of wise advice.
a tree, a tree, a tree, a pillar bound
to touch the vaulted sky, deliberate
with clouds and house the birds that flit around
this grove. I need no guidance- life is great.While summer aims to sear our leaves and zap
our vigor, gusts of autumn crook our boughs
and sudden blizzards force a winter’s nap.
I bow to know my brother’s shadow in
the August drought. I dodge the gales behind
a massive trunk. As elder trees begin
to draw their sap to earth, I match my kind.Our sapling hears as ancient groans espouse
the wisdom found in bands of weathered rings
and hidden pools our deepest roots can dowse.
A tree must learn the lessons trees accrue
to scale the zenith held in cloud and blue.To reach the height of noble wooded kings,
the sprout must tap the wells of deepest springs.**
*edited from - the sprout must struggle underground to springs.