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 Apr 9 08, 07:41
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 1,802 Joined: 24-April 04 From: Connecticut Member No.: 58 Real Name: Ron Jones Writer of: Poetry  |
The "Faerie Queene" for Spencer was his pet.
The form and style would ever take his name. All poets, past and present owe a debt to "Ed", who introduced his royal dame. We know the reformation was his aim, Elizabeth to honor and exalt... And by the way his lines of nine became a literary form devoid of fault, above another queen, the sonnet, to assault. Notes: Changed Feary to Faerie, TY PP & M Added "and" to line 7 TY Cleo ·······  ······· |
  
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Apr 10 08, 15:08
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 1,621 Joined: 18-August 05 From: Johannesburg, South Africa Member No.: 127 Real Name: Beverleigh Gail Annegarn Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Jox |
Hi Ron~
Just a question- Is it supposed to be Feary or Faery? PP ······· ······· |
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Apr 10 08, 19:07
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 2,085 Joined: 24-May 04 From: Time, Immoral Member No.: 66 Writer of: Poetry |
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Apr 13 08, 13:48
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Well done Ron!
 You're one beat short here: By the way his lines of nine became but is easily rectified by adding an 'and' at the start. Cheers ~Cleo ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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