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Real Name: Lori Kanter
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
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Hello MM viewers! I'm awarding the Faery Award to this fine piece nominated by Toumai. Way to go, Nina! Thanks for coloring the Mosaic in faery nice style! :pharoah2 Check out this tile in the poetry forum, Seren's Synapse as well!
The Matrix (Revised)
The laser beams down, luminous in its glow; highlighting the vast field of human embryos, ripe for hatching.
Machines ready, to absorb pure organic matter, feeding the mainframe, driving a powerful program.
Creating a world of illusion - hardcode mimics life; a world spanning generations. People obsessing over life’s minor problems; succumbing to emotions, urges and desires; blissfully unaware that they have no choice.
Nothing is real; every movement, every thought controlled by a computer program - The Matrix.
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