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 Greek  Posts: 743 Joined: 3-February 09 From: Abingdon, Oxfordshire,UK Member No.: 754 Real Name: Leonora Wyatt Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:No one at all  |
In this Senyru, the number of dots indicate the length of time the cat watches the mouse hole -
each dot = 10 minutes. I will attempt a comment within the week! =========================================================================== First Revision Senile cat watches those dark,alluring mouseholes... ... meanwhile, mice eat cheese Leo ·······  ······· |
  
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 8,904 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Hi Leo!
I'm SO pleased you re-posted your amusing Senryu! I especially laughed at the "one dot equals 10 mins" part...haha....Don't know whether dots are orthodox form, but I don't care!!! Now I'll have to wait to see whether what I posted as Haikus are really such. They're not HAHA stuff, but who knows? Congrats and I'm off to read your second Topic. Syl*** ······· ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner              |
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Sekhmet Senile Cat - Senyru Feb 15 09, 12:05 
ohsteve Leo, got to love those sneaky, squeaky meeses to p... Feb 15 09, 12:35 Eisa Hi Leo
I read your reply to Larry's senryu fi... Feb 16 09, 17:03 Larry Hey Leo,
Bring it back and re-post it. To get th... Feb 16 09, 17:28 Sekhmet Good morning Harry and Snow - Thank you both for... Feb 18 09, 03:03 Larry Hi Leo,
There is absolutely nothing wrong (IMO) w... Feb 18 09, 09:51 Psyche Hi Leo!
Great to find you here! But ve... Feb 18 09, 20:27 ace Leo:
Without getting into the comment or no thing... Feb 25 09, 18:16 Sekhmet Hello, and thank you enormously - to all those de... Feb 26 09, 03:50 Larry Hello Leo,
Again I say, "Delightful". ... Feb 26 09, 18:54 
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