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Nov 7 03, 09:11
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Dear Daniel
Ow weh ! Das tut weh !
FLOORED, BY A SIMPLE QUESTION !
Parquet carpets or tiles to floor rooms in house being built in a Spanish style por que ?
Love Alan
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Nov 7 03, 09:31
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Hey Alan
Pork pies! Three cheers Alan Novocaine worn off You can sshtop sshucking sshoup And get stuck into the goodies Yippee!
:dance: :dance: Love
Grace
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Nov 7 03, 09:46
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WHAT ALES THEE, FALSTAFF ?
Yer pie and yer chips too yer Cumberland sausage bacon, eggs, french toast; who needs a BEER gut ?
Love Alan
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Nov 7 03, 12:37
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Tough one Alan,
QUOTE Yer pie and yer chips too yer Cumberland sausage bacon, eggs, french toast; who needs a BEER gut ? Birgette Bardot ? Hot stuff! Quintessential sexpot Discarded Vadim and Distel Strange girl!
Grace
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Nov 7 03, 12:50
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Dear Grace
Well modified !
WEAKER(MINDED) SEX SURVEY
Strange ? Girl ? So what is new ? Does she know what she wants ? Do I know, what she says she wants, ain't it ?
Alan McAlpine Douglas
PS Poetic licence used - these are NOT my real opinions, he hastened to add just as the lynch mob started stringing him up .....
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Nov 7 03, 20:16
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MODAL'TY FORD
Paint it "Any Color" Ford, Had rainbow way with words : "Paint it black, black, black, paint it black". So long .....
Alan McAlpine Douglas
PS Def of Modality : "A tendency to conform to a general pattern" !
Daniel, watcha think of that one ? ! ? LOL
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Nov 8 03, 00:10
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Well done Sir Knight
Good riposte!
A BIENTOT
So long farewell, adieu adios amigos, bye via condios my darlings au’voir! Grace
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Nov 8 03, 07:38
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QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 23:10) Well done Sir Knight
Good riposte!
A BIENTOT
So long farewell, adieu adios amigos, bye via condios my darlings au’voir! Grace Super pieces, both of you; and what fun!
Grace, your words brought to mind this harsh scene. Please do not think it is meant as a portrayal of the interchanges here! It's the words that merely triggered thoughts in my demented brain... and yet a not-so-uncommon picture:
Ohhhhhh’d to a Kiss
Au’voir
his glib shoulder
he rejoined ‘er blew eyes
with his cleaver riposte, smearing
Kiss off.
© Daniel J Ricketts 08 Nov 2003
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Nov 8 03, 17:29
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QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Nov. 08 2003, 05:38) to a Kiss
Au’voir his glib shoulder he rejoined ‘er blew eyes with his cleaver riposte, smearing Kiss off.
Turtle Race
Kiss off; Please pause this race. Slow and steady will work (Give me the turtle any day.) life long.
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Nov 8 03, 19:03
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Nov 9 03, 01:26
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Good morning Daniel
No Contest
Life long ago became too hare-raising for him; rabbit let time and turtle pass him: bye Nice take on Aesop (he's hanging about MM somewhere now Dan. Watch out for plagiarism writ!! )
Meanwhile on Sunday...
Hymn by S Baring-Gould ‘Onward, Christian Soldiers’ rouses even distracted boys to sing
Grace
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QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 09 2003, 00:26) Good morning Daniel QUOTE No Contest
Life long ago became too hare-raising for him; rabbit let time and turtle pass him: bye Nice take on Aesop (he's hanging about MM somewhere now Daniel . Watch out for plagiarism writ!! ) ~ ~ ~ Just a grace note here, Grace:
Aesop it is fabled wrote some good moral stuff; but who really knows if he’d been a sop?© Daniel J Ricketts 09 Nov 2003~ ~ ~ Meanwhile on Sunday...
Hymn by S Baring-Gould ‘Onward, Christian Soldiers’ rouses even distracted boys to sing
Grace Good morning to you as well, fine Lady Grace!
Gladly the Cross I’d Bear
To sing The Cross-Eyed Bear confused distracted boys who thought, Who’d write a hymn about Gladly?
© Daniel J Ricketts 09 Nov 2003 eschewin' snickers, but smilin' like the Milky Way, Daniel
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Nov 9 03, 07:46
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QUOTE Good morning to you as well, fine Lady Grace! Gladly the Cross I’d Bear
To sing The Cross-Eyed Bear confused distracted boys who thought, Who’d write a hymn about Gladly?
[b]Easily confused, young boys Daniel. I speak from experience having had four sons! :wall:
Very comical. I like! :rofl:
Glad lay in bed too long was five feet six last night Woke this morning after long stretch Six nine!
Love
Grace :cheer:
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Nov 10 03, 01:39
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Nov 10 03, 02:34
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QUOTE Well, Grace... that is either quite a stretch... or he's VERY TALL!
‘s Mutt
Sics? Nein! I would never have Zoe attack you; but our part-Chow would love a stretch abed.
Good Night to you then Dan,
I’ve just got up!
HE is a SHE Dan, Glad being short for GLADYS.
A bed Strewn with roses Might please your blued-tongued pal Sweeten her temper, save my hide From bites!
Sleep well, and give Zeus a bid hug for me. Go on, force yourself!
Love
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Nov 11 03, 07:11
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QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 10 2003, 01:34) QUOTE Well, Grace... that is either quite a stretch... or he's VERY TALL! ‘s Mutt
Sics? Nein! I would never have Zoe attack you; but our part-Chow would love a stretch abed. Good Night to you then Dan iel, I’ve just got up! HE is a SHE Dan, Glad being short for GLADYS. [ Ok, Grace... now you've really got my curiosity going! Who or what is GLADYS?! ]A bed Strewn with roses Might please your blued-tongued pal Sweeten her temper, save my hide From bites! Sleep well, and give Zeus a bid hug for me. Go on, force yourself! [ I don't have trouble with such things... but I don't know what a bid hug is (Is it an E-Bay thing?), so I gave him a regular one. ]Love Grace (Wide awake and bright as a button)
From bytes
to face-to-face,
we rendezvous again…
Just Daniel ~ Pun hugs M&M ~
Z-man
And we had a great three hours together over dinner!
- Lightly, Daniel
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Nov 14 03, 07:30
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Hi Daniel,
Gladys is a girl's name - at least it is over here ???
Feeling better now? Sounds like you had a great re-union with Zeus.
From bytes to face-to-face, we rendezvous again… Just Daniel ~ Pun hugs M&M ~ Z-man
back at ya Dan
Reunion
Zee man Wiz zer sweet tooth? Re-fought the war with soup? Put world to rights with main course? Aah Sweet!
TaTa
Grace
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Nov 14 03, 08:06
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QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 06:30) Hi Daniel,
Gladys is a girl's name - at least it is over here ???
Feeling better now? Sounds like you had a great re-union with Zeus.
From bytes to face-to-face, we rendezvous again… Just Daniel ~ Pun hugs M&M ~ Z-man back at ya Dan
Reunion
Zee man Wiz zer sweet tooth? Re-fought the war with soup? Put world to rights with main course? Aah Sweet! TaTa
Grace
pain de guerre
as wheat becomes le pain l'amour est parfois guerre we’ll not expect to winnow gain with wind
© Daniel J Ricketts 14 Nov 2003
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Nov 14 03, 11:23
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Hi Dan, :wave:
QUOTE Pain de guerre as wheat becomes le pain l'amour est parfois guerre we’ll not expect to winnow gain with wind
La douleur D'amour
with wind tears dry on cheeks hiding the sharp heartache I feel, when love is sometimes war sweet foe
Grace :cheer:
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Nov 14 03, 23:07
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QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 14 2003, 10:23) Hi Dan, La douleur D'amour
with wind tears dry on cheeks hiding the sharp heartache I feel, when love is sometimes war sweet foe
Grace Hey, Gracie!
break-through
Sweet fo mah gal’s kisses ah ain’t havin’ no pane ‘tween me an’ them. Out o’ da way; it’s war!
© Daniel J Ricketts 14 Nov 2003
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