Hi Sue,
It's not too late (I'm going to be rounding up member names and SQ poem titles through end of September, where then I'll be emailing out a word doc permission form to be signed and returned back to me). It will list the author's name and poem titles and give MM non-exclusive permission to use it in the upcoming chapbook (name still being decided) - you retain all rights as always.
I like the revision but stumbled on the last stanza in L3:
I store these treasured memories
of summer nights and fantasies
in jars of dreams especially forthese treasured memories I store.
I believe it's your choice of 'especially for' so I've jotted down a few alternate word choices for you to ponder as you wish to T or T. I'm looking forward to writing a few SQ's soon once my muse returns from her extended absence.
I store these treasured memories
of summer nights and fantasies
in jars of dreams
I’ll then explore, (I will explore, I do explore,)these treasured memories I store.
I store these treasured memories
of summer nights and fantasies
in jars of dreams
I so adore; (I do adore;)these treasured memories I store.
I store these treasured memories
of summer nights and fantasies
in jars of dreams
meant to adore;these treasured memories I store.
Cheers!
~Cleo