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Crispy leaves drift sunspun air;
wistful days of wondering. Colored pieces piling high, moment’s tainted suffering. Strolling footprints, moving truths, chilling sorrow aches my bones. Ginger, gold and crimson pink, cheery childhood undertones. Timeless dancing in the wind, Autumn’s brilliant scenery. Fleeting seconds warm my heart once upon the greenery. ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Aphrodite Undertones Aug 22 03, 08:59 
Dear Aphro !
Neat, esp as it is 7 syllables p... Aug 22 03, 09:16 Eisa QUOTE(Aphrodite @ Aug. 22 2003, 08:59)Crispy ... Aug 22 03, 11:48 Aphrodite QUOTE(Alan @ Aug. 22 2003, 09:16)Dear Aphro ... Aug 22 03, 14:35 Aphrodite QUOTE(Eisa @ Aug. 22 2003, 11:48)QUOTE(Aphrod... Aug 22 03, 14:39 Arnfinn Hi Aphro
HMMMMMMMMMM...............rINGS A Bell... Aug 23 03, 07:27 Aphrodite QUOTE(Arnfinn @ Aug. 23 2003, 07:27)Hi Aphro ... Aug 24 03, 08:17 Cleo_Serapis Hi Lindi! :)
Did I never comment on this piece? ... Jul 31 04, 06:29 jgdittier Dear A,
Treat me to a poem with a cadence like /-/... Jul 31 04, 07:37 Don Hi Linda,
I am not in a nitty mood.
I agree with... Aug 1 04, 09:17 Aphrodite QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ July 31 2004, 07:29)Hi L... Aug 7 04, 15:52 Aphrodite QUOTE(jgdittier @ July 31 2004, 08:37)Dear A,... Aug 7 04, 16:01 Aphrodite QUOTE(Don @ Aug. 01 2004, 10:17)Hi Linda,
I ... Aug 7 04, 16:09 Arnfinn Hey, this poem is nearly a year old.
Hi Lindi,
... Aug 8 04, 07:18 Don Lindi~~
Returned to reread "Untertones."
I saw l... Aug 8 04, 08:57 Aphrodite QUOTE(Arnfinn @ Aug. 08 2004, 08:18)Hey, this... Aug 9 04, 17:55 Aphrodite QUOTE(Don @ Aug. 08 2004, 09:57)Lindi~~
Retu... Aug 9 04, 17:59 Ephiny Hi Lindi
This is such a beautiful poem and it m... Aug 10 04, 06:10 
Aphrodite QUOTE(Ephiny @ Aug. 10 2004, 07:10)Hi Lindi ... Aug 10 04, 18:13 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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