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Oct 14 07, 12:37
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Joined: 28-May 07
From: Co. Galway, Ireland
Member No.: 440
Real Name: Terry O C
Writer of: Poetry
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Wen da night fell der wiz I in da dark, an although all alone, eeerrie voices did 'ark; sain, Na'er be a tinking dat tis' all in yer ed, fer t-night an fer all noights ye lie wit da ded!
Such da shock an da terror o what I bin told, dat I shook an I trembled as me life's blood ran cold.
On dat moonless black noight fer moiles could be 'eard, me las eartly screams bein rip'd o dis world.
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When the night fell there was I in the dark and although all alone errie voices did hark, saying;
"Na'er be a thinking that 'tis all in your head for tonight and for all nights you lie with the dead"
Such the shock and the terror of what I'd been told, that I shook and I trembled, as my life's blood ran cold.
On that moonless black night, for miles could be heard, my last earthly screams being ripped from this world.
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Terocon101 Shivered Oct 14 07, 12:37 ohsteve Terry.. I love the first verse, I should say the f... Oct 18 07, 07:57  Terocon101 QUOTE (ohsteve @ Oct 18 07, 13:57 ) 10367... Oct 19 07, 20:22 Alan Dear Terry,
Re the accent, it is a bit hard to gt... Oct 28 07, 14:55  Terocon101 Hey Alan,
Yeah I'm fairly poor at 'pirate... Nov 5 07, 09:37
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