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> Jeoffry ~ Revised 20 June 2007, a flash response
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Stimulus: A fragment from Kit Smart's Jubilate Agno:

"For I will consider my Cat Jeoffry.
For he is the servant of the Living God duly and daily serving him.
For at the first glance of the glory of God in the East he worships in his way.
For this is done by wreathing his body seven times round with elegant quickness.
For then he leaps up to catch the musk, which is the blessing of God upon his prayer.
For he rolls upon prank to work it in...."





kitty.gif Jeoffry kitty.gif

He is sleek unto himself,
blending onyx and brilliance.

Seven - that magic number -
seven times he wreaths
his agile frame to the East,
ascends on haunch hopes;
no more, no less.

Toward latent stars he arcs
in complementary prayer,
and sheaths his domain with
spindrifts of nature’s musk.

Friends frolic in the grassy knoll
to mark their place in society
then yield to his presence: exercising
their position in his kingdom.

He crouches low and slowly
advances amongst his
camouflaged backdrop;
a transient salutation
that shadows pranks of the day…

then quietly sneaks back
to the comfort of a cushy couch
and moons himself to sleep.

A god made unto himself,
he blends onyx and brilliance.

Copyright © Lorraine M Kanter




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He is sleek upon himself,
blending onyx with brilliance.

Seven - that magic number -
seven times he wreaths
his agile frame to the East,
ascending on haunch hopes;
no more, no less.

Toward latent stars he arcs,
and sheaths his domain
with the musk of nature’s scent.

Friends frolic in the grassy knoll
marking their place in society,
yielding his presence, exercising
their position in his kingdom.

A god made unto himself,
he ponders the pranks of today…
then quietly sneaks back
to the comforts of a cushy couch
and suns himself to sleep.

He is sleek upon himself,
blending onyx with brilliance.


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- Cleo_Serapis   Jeoffry ~ Revised 20 June 2007   May 28 07, 11:00
- - bbnixon   Hi Lori, I loved this when I read in the flash ch...   May 30 07, 06:04
|- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Brenda, Thanks - this was a fun one to write! ...   Jun 16 07, 09:40
- - Eisa   Hi Lori This is wonderful -- I have read it a few...   May 30 07, 07:09
|- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Snow. Thank you! I had fun with it! I made a c...   Jun 16 07, 09:47
- - Judi   Hi Lori....Love this poem and can relate to it. I...   May 30 07, 09:55
|- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Judi. Yes, I think if someone reads this that ...   Jun 16 07, 10:06
- - Psyche   Hi Lori! Love this one! Of course, I can...   May 30 07, 11:59
|- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Psyche @ May 30 07, 12:59 ) 97108H...   Jun 16 07, 10:26
- - AMETHYST   Woooo Hoooo You! Excellent response to the stimulu...   May 30 07, 22:18
|- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (AMETHYST @ May 30 07, 23:18 ) 9714...   Jun 16 07, 10:34
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thanks everyone for your most thoughtful commentar...   Jun 9 07, 05:55
- - Psyche   My very best wishes for your Bose proyect, Lori de...   Jun 11 07, 10:34
|- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Psyche @ Jun 11 07, 11:34 ) 98033M...   Jun 16 07, 10:57
- - bbnixon   Hi Lori, I have such a weakness for cats. Sorry i...   Jun 17 07, 07:08
|- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Brenda. No worries - I'm thankful you've come...   Jun 19 07, 05:31
- - Orion   Lori, I enjoyed reading your poem and varied resp...   Jun 17 07, 14:11
|- - Cleo_Serapis   Hello Jan! Nice to see you in my tile. Let's se...   Jun 19 07, 05:33
- - AMETHYST   Congratulations Lori, Best Wishes - and Big Hug...   Jul 1 07, 19:14
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thanks very much Liz!   Jul 7 07, 09:08

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