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post Jul 15 07, 17:23
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Real Name: Jan
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My toes didn't care
if last night's leftover rains
drenched them on this early morning

walk to the middle
of that glorious hibiscus
whispering, wooingly, to the
camera-woman,

"Put your coffee cup down - now;
pick up your camera!"

The backyard trip was
well worth soaked sandals
and feet - and ankles -
traipsing in blades,
wispy, wet, swaying.

What was this calling about?
Moved me from my cozy kitchen
to see delicate beauty
through mesmerized lens-

{click}

little bee in bee heaven,
bee toes pollen-dipped in
piles of snow-white

{click}

If a bee could have
smiled, I know this
bee was grinning for
a quick shot.

Left a wondering me -
who was happier
the saturated photographer
or the pollinated bee?


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JustDaniel
post Jul 16 07, 10:20
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Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr.
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Beautiful, Jan! I'm in a bit of a rush at the moment... but I wanted to take a whiff at the pollent myself before I flitted off.

I'll be back with some suggestions to clip off a few excess petals and leaves here and there, maybe to just retouch and airbrush a beautiful picture to make it more delicate.

deLighting again to be read you, Daniel sun.gif


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