DEar BV, Anyone who reads me knows I focus on rhythm and that I want my presentation to sound as much like music as possible. I believe our ears are attuned to repetitiousness and when the beats fall pleasureably on the ear, the message will be enhanced. Jim in helping you has helped me and I'll be reading Jim's link tonite. There is always another way to propose the same thought and generally it is easiest to do in iambs. If you lay out your pattern first, for instance: -/-/-/-/. My guess is words will feed into the form nicely for as Daniel has said, you seem to have a natural ability with metre. Cheers, Ron jgd
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