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 Oct 21 06, 09:21
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry  |
 ][center] Vexing Moon The spirits vex on Hallows Eve, when veils are thin above the dead, a harvest rich, makes them not leave, their treats are bitter dark from dread. Translucent movement in the night a scary howling full of shrills, green witches stew, brews soup of fright, as goblins dance a dance of chills. Parades through lanes search long for sweets, afraid to see a ghostly form, and bars of plenty; gooey treats tempt hungry kids into haunt’s storm. ©Linda Balboni 2004[/center] ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Oct 24 06, 05:17
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Lindi.
     What a great treat here!     Your rhythms and rhymes are wonderful and the tale of Halloween sings in this poem.  The spirits vex on Hallows Eve, when veils are thin above the dead OOOOOhhh, excellent opening! Translucent movement in the night a scary howling full of shrills, green witches stew, brews soup of fright, as goblins dance a dance of chills. My fav! I enjoyed this!  ~Cleo 
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Oct 25 06, 13:29
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 20,450 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Your illustration is a chuckler, Lindi, and your poem is a good accompaniment to it!
Ain't nothin' vexes me but sweets, 'cause they jest fires me urge fer eats! No need o' ghosts or spirits here; I get sucked up five pounds per year! Lightly, Daniel 
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Aphrodite Vexing Moon Oct 21 06, 09:21 
Eisa Hi Linda
I love this very topical poem -- and the... Oct 21 06, 18:47 
Aphrodite QUOTE (Eisa @ Oct 21 06, 23:47 ) Hi Linda... Oct 26 06, 16:25 jgdittier Dear Linda,
Here is the most imaginative posting I... Oct 23 06, 16:32 Aphrodite QUOTE (jgdittier @ Oct 23 06, 21:32 ) Dea... Oct 26 06, 16:27 Jim AKA Rapid-Fire Perfect for the upcoming night of the little candy... Oct 24 06, 03:51 Aphrodite QUOTE (Jim AKA Rapid-Fire @ Oct 24 06, 0... Oct 26 06, 16:28 Aphrodite QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Oct 25 06, 18:29 ) Yo... Oct 26 06, 16:33 poeticpiers we did not used to have trick or treat here in the... Nov 19 06, 07:16 Aphrodite QUOTE (poeticpiers @ Nov 19 06, 12:16 ) w... Jan 13 07, 13:27 Aphrodite QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Oct 24 06, 10:17 ) ... Oct 26 06, 16:31 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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