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Jun 9 06, 06:22
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Creative Chieftain

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Dunno, I thought I might Tidy up a bit more Yeah I know it gets boring
Me last Revision.
EVER WONDER
Ever wonder how thoughts react in the fissures of the brain? Do they act out what we’re thinking within the psyche train? When your driving down a street and stop when lights turn red, do our thoughts speed up then halt at every artery in our head?
Both eyes turn images upside down then right way up to see, how can we be sure at all times that eyes will act correctly? If one eye turned an image down, to abandon it— and cheat would one be looking straight ahead, while the other stares at feet?
A nose is always hard at work tracing fascinating smells, it isolates scents we’re sniffing, then sends messages to brain cells. If a nose acted sneaky mixed marsupial with blossom, would the perfumed flowers pong of Kangaroo and Possum?
And what about our vocal chords? Useful, when we wish to speak— chords have tune cells to vibrate them; create words that talk or squeak. Just imagine what would happen if some tune cells fell asleep, what odd noises we would be making when our friends we chanced to meet.
Look at flapping ears; we have them on the outside of our skull, if they rejected sound, our lives would be unfulfilled and dull; we’d miss out on the enjoyment when our partners uttered words, no soothing sounds of orchestras or sweet twittering of birds.
Yes, there’s no doubt— we need all those brain cells sitting in our head, over a hundred billion in a medical journal I read. So go and make tea or coffee, put up your feet— watch a show, remember our body’s vitalised by cells knowing where to go.
Here we go again. Grace gave me a heap of ideas. Sooooooooo I've done another revision. Thank you Grace, youv'e spent a lot of thyme on this, to which I'm ingratitued...
EVER WONDERED
Ever wonder how thoughts react in the fissures of the brain? Do they act out what were thinking deep within the psyche train? When you’re driving down a street and stop when lights turn red, do our thoughts speed up then halt at every artery in our head?
Eyes turn images upside down then the right way up to see, how can we be sure at all times that eyes will act correctly? If one eye turned an image down, to abandon it— and cheat would one observe what lies ahead, while the other stared at feet?
A nose is always hard at work tracing odours, scents and smells It studies what we are sniffing, then sends messages to brain cells. If noses acted sneakily, mixed marsupial-blossom, would the fragrant flowers pong of Kangaroo and Possum?
And what about our vocal chords? Useful when we wish to speak— Chords have tune cells to vibrate them, create words that talk or squeak. Just imagine what would happen if some tune cells fell asleep, what odd noises we would be making when our friends we chanced to meet.
Look at flapping ears; we have them on the outside of our skull, if they rejected sound, our lives would be unfulfilled and dull. We’d miss out on the enjoyment when our partners uttered words? No soothing sounds of orchestras or sweet twittering of birds.
Yes, no doubt— we need all those brain cells sitting in our head, there’s over a hundred billion a medical journal said. So go and make tea or coffee, put up your feet— watch a show, remember our body’s vitalised by cells knowing where to go.
I wish to thank, Cathy who put a lot of work into putting the polish on me poem
Heeeeeeeeeeeeere we go.
Revision
EVER WONDERED
Ever wonder how thoughts re-act in the fissures of your brain? Do thoughts act out what we’re thinking within the psyche train? You’re driving down the street, and stop when lights turn red, do thoughts speed-up then halt at every artery in your head?
Both eyes turn images upside down, then right way up to see, how can we be sure at all-times they eyes will act correctly? If one eye turned an image upside down, then left it to cheat would one be looking straight ahead, the other at our feet?
A nose is very smart... checking, identifying scents and smells It studies what we’re sniffing, then sends messages to brain cells. If a nose acted sneaky and mixed marsupial scent with blossom, would we have perfumed flowers scented of Kangaroo and Possum?
What about vocal chords, there useful when we wish to speak? Chords have tune cells to vibrate them, to make us talk or creak. Just imagine what would happen if a few tune cells fell asleep, what odd noises we’d be making if friends we chanced to meet.
Look at flapping ears; we have them on the outside of our skull, If they repulsed sound, our lives would be undisturbed and dull. Would we miss enjoyment when our partners muttered words? There’d be no symphonic orchestras or sweet twittering birds.
Yes, no doubt— we need all those brain cells sitting in our head, there’s over a hundred billion according to a magazine I read. So go and make some coffee, put up your feet, and watch a show Then hope ears, eyes, nose and voice cells will stimulate and go.
Easy flowinggggggggggggggggggggg, Cathy
Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank ya.
EVER WONDERED
Ever wondered how thoughts re-act in the fissures of your brain. Do thoughts act out what we’re thinking within the psyche train? You’re driving down the street, and stop when the lights turn red, Do thoughts speed-up and then halt at every artery in your head?
Both our eyes turn images upside down then right way up to see, How can we be sure at all-times that our eyes will act correctly? If one eye turned an image upside down then left it there to cheat Would one be looking straight ahead and the other at our feet?
A nose is very smart checking and identifying scents and smells It studies what we’re sniffing, then sends messages to brain cells. If a nose acted sneaky and mixed marsupial scent with blossom, We’d have perfumed flowers scented of Kangaroo and Possum?
What about vocal chords’ there useful when we wish to speak? Chords have tune cells, to vibrate them, to make us talk or creak. Just imagine what would happen if a few tune cells fell asleep What odd noises we’d be making if friends we chanced to meet.
Look at flapping ears; we have them on the outside of our skull, If they repulsed sound, our lives would be undisturbed and dull. We would miss enjoyment when our partners muttered words? There’d be no symphonic orchestras and sweet twittering birds.
Yes, no doubt— we need all those brain cells sitting in our head, There’s over a hundred billion according— to a magazine I read. So go and make some coffee, put up your feet, and watch a show Then hope, ears, eyes, nose and voice cells will stimulate and go.
Arnfinn © John Macleod 9th June 2006
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Aug 19 06, 10:20
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Mosaic Master

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Congrats John on your wizard award winning tile!  Well done!  ~Cleo :)
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Arnfinn EVER WONDERED Jun 9 06, 06:22 Cathy Hi John,
This is certainly interesting! LOL ... Jun 10 06, 14:30 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John,
I don't know if you know me or not, ... Jun 14 06, 20:56 Arnfinn Hi Cathy,
What do you reckin are all ya brain ce... Jun 17 06, 04:03 Arnfinn G'day Peggy, (Margaret ?)
I don't know i... Jun 17 06, 04:15 JLY John,
Cathy has done quite a detailed job in provi... Jun 20 06, 05:47 Arnfinn How are Ya
I can't think of anything John?
... Jun 22 06, 04:59 JLY John,
I have been thinking, but my mental pictures... Jun 22 06, 05:42 AMETHYST BRAVO...
What a wonderful...delightful and curiou... Jun 26 06, 22:39  Arnfinn QUOTE(AMETHYST @ Jun 27 06, 03:39 ) 77552... Jun 29 06, 06:45 Arnfinn How are ya John,
Flappin, floppin, fluttin.
Ya ... Jun 29 06, 06:26 AMETHYST Hi John,
It was so good to read this poem, and y... Jun 30 06, 10:57  Arnfinn QUOTE(AMETHYST @ Jun 30 06, 15:57 ) 77755... Jul 6 06, 06:43 Cybele Strewth mate!
Ya bin excercising yer menta... Jul 5 06, 02:38  Arnfinn QUOTE(Cybele @ Jul 5 06, 07:38 ) 78001Str... Jul 6 06, 07:01   Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Arnfinn @ Jul 6 06, 08:01 ) 78064Ya... Jul 8 06, 07:52 Cybele Hey Arnnnnnnnniiiee!
QUOTEAnnnnnnnnnnnnnd Ya ... Jul 6 06, 07:43 Cybele Watcha Cob,
OK Heres's a little pick and mi... Jul 6 06, 10:46 Arnfinn Wow ya put a lot work in Cob.
I run of... Jul 8 06, 02:14 Cybele Mornin' Arnieee,
Hope your takin care of yo... Jul 8 06, 02:39 The Ten-Digit Poet Good morning, John,
I enjoyed the humor in this p... Jul 8 06, 06:09 poeticpiers This poem fascinated me as I am extremely interest... Jul 8 06, 10:06  Arnfinn QUOTE(poeticpiers @ Jul 8 06, 15:06 ) 782... Jul 10 06, 06:25 Cleo_Serapis Hi John.
A very philosophical poem I enjoyed read... Jul 9 06, 09:22  Arnfinn QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ Jul 9 06, 14:22 ) 78... Jul 10 06, 06:51 Cybele Hey Arnnnniiiiiiiie!!!
Bonzer revi... Jul 10 06, 07:12  Arnfinn QUOTE(Cybele @ Jul 10 06, 12:12 ) 78392He... Jul 12 06, 00:57 Cathy Congratulations John! Aug 19 06, 14:01 Eisa Great work John -- Congratulations.
Snow Aug 19 06, 17:13 Arnfinn Hey, Ten-digit-poet,
Sorry mate, missed out ackno... Aug 25 06, 01:55 Arnfinn Hi, Lori, Cathy and Snow,
Thank you for your wi... Aug 25 06, 01:58
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