Undertones Options

[Aphrodite]

Crispy leaves drift sunspun air;
wistful days of wondering.
Colored pieces piling high,
moment’s tainted suffering.

Strolling footprints, moving truths,
chilling sorrow aches my bones.
Ginger, gold and crimson pink,
cheery childhood undertones.

Timeless dancing in the wind,
Autumn’s brilliant scenery.
Fleeting seconds warm my heart
once upon the greenery.

[Aphrodite]

Hi Aphro

HMMMMMMMMMM...............rINGS A Bellllllllllllll!

Crispy leaves drift peaceful air;
wistful days of wondering.
Colored pieces piling high,
moment’s tainted suffering.

Strolling footprints, moving truths,>>>>>cool
chilling sorrow aches my bones.>>>>>>>>how true
Ginger, gold and crimson pink,
cheery childhood, undertones.

Timeless dancing in the wind,>>>>>>>>lovely
Autumn’s brilliant scenery.
Fleeting seconds warm my heart,>>>>>>>>lovely
once upon the greenery.>>>>>>>>tops it off

As Jim Carey would say.

Baaaaaaaaabeeeeeeeee Dohnt chaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaannge

a thing

Ya got talent girl Ya got me in a whirl.

EXeeeeeeeeept perhaps the colour scheme.

Ginger, gold and crimson pink,
cheery childhood, undertones.

Did you mean cheery to become a colour___perhaps
CHERRY hhmmmmmmmm.no!hhhhhhhhhhhmm blushing childhood

Dont matter    

Enjoyed.

Arnie.................>>>>>>--->>>--->> the Finn

Hello Arnie~

I appreciate you stopping by to read my poem, and for your nice words.
Basically, this is a reflective piece, conjuring up bittersweet memories.     

As far as: "Ginger, gold and crimson pink,
cheery childhood, undertones"
I used the word, "cheery" because it does have a similar sound to cherry, yet means "happy."  
Under the dying leaves~precious memories.

Anyhoo, thanks again, and I look forward to reading your work.

Take care~        
Aphrodite