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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose  |
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 *Graphic provided by Celtic Castle Designs REVISION (With thanks to Nina) NORTH WEST PASSAGE Interrupted moonbeams dance on icebergs and trail their milk-white fingers in icy sea, accompanying emerald rhythms of the Borealis. The blue-white stage emits a ghostly hue, evanescent and lambent by turns. In the vast silence, glaciers tower like cathedrals in the midnight sky. Aboard The Erebus, an old salt, inured to the show; stamps his feet, breathes warmth into his calloused hands and dreams of hot tea, unwitting of his fate. North-West Passage Interrupted moonbeams dance on icebergs and trail their milk-white fingers in icy sea, accompanying emerald rhythms of the Borealis. The blue-white stage emits a ghostly hue, evanescent and lambent by turns. In the vast silence glaciers tower like cathedrals in the midnight sky. Aboard The Erebus, an old salt, inured to the show; unwitting of his fate, stamps his feet, breathes warmth into his calloused hands and dreams of hot tea. (All rights reserved by Grace Galton as an unpublished work.) Link below for information on John Franklin’s ill-fated expedition to find the North-West Passage. http://www.mta.ca/faculty....in.html ·······  ······· Love
Grace  http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner             |
  
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Congrats Grace on your Member Choice award winning tile!
 Well done!   ~Cleo :) ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner    |
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Cybele NORTH-WEST PASSAGE Jun 21 05, 09:15 
Nina Hi Grace
An intriguing mystery, thanks for the li... Jun 21 05, 12:16 Cybele Good morning Nina,
Thank you for dropping in to c... Jun 23 05, 01:59 Toumai Hi Grace,
I have to admit to shying away from thi... Jun 23 05, 03:27 Cybele Hi Fran,
QUOTEI have to admit to shying away from... Jun 23 05, 08:13 Dear Grace,
My first, pre-read confusion was with... Jun 23 05, 09:22 Cybele Good Sir Knight
My first, pre-read confusion w... Jun 23 05, 17:21 Cleo_Serapis HI Grace.
I've enjoyed this one very much! ... Jun 26 05, 05:40 Cybele Good morning Lori,
QUOTEI've enjoyed th... Jun 26 05, 06:47 Jox Grace,
My apologies - i have meant to crit this o... Jun 26 05, 10:50 Cybele Hi James,
QUOTEMy apologies - i have meant to cri... Jun 26 05, 11:34 Nina Hi Grace
One suggestion for that tricky line:
ho... Jun 26 05, 11:44 Cybele Hi Nina,
QUOTEOne suggestion for that tricky li... Jun 26 05, 16:52 Nina my pleasure
Nina Jun 26 05, 16:56 
Nina Hi Grace
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